The window above the plant is too bright and doesn’t fit with the drawn window on the wallpaper on the right. 9/10. Other than it it’s good.
I came up with a dorm description for mine:
Check out my fun-in-the-sun beach bar. Situated on the best beach of the Caribbean: Flamenco! Lie on a beautiful hammock and nap while listening to the breezy winds. Sit back on a beach chair and enjoy a Piña Colada from the bar nearby. Also, the beach is definitely pet-friendly and the local store sells a wide variety of stereos and popcorn so you can unwind and relax to some deep bass tunes.