Not a sci-fi or anime fan sadly so personally 1st room I'd rate 6.5/10 and 2nd room 7/10 but if I was one then both are 10/10. Surprisingly that 999 in the 1st room fits well
6.5/10 I love the aesthetic you’re going for but I don’t like the overlapping furniture (abv desk, poster, and 999). The bookcase and plant doesn’t really fit either. I’d recommend a dark brown simple wood bookcase. Maybe something kind of thin so it matches the desk.
9/10 for your first dorm and 8/10 for your second- both look cozy but I do prefer the first dorm more
Dorm 1: 6/10 Dorm 2: 9/10 I like the vibes of #1, but I don't think some of the furni go together, so it loses its flow. I love #2, neon is amazing, but the 999ec and plant...
Dorm #1: 10/10 Biblio is literally the only full dormset I'd ever want. And you made it better with the Jungle wallpaper, frfr. I'm in love. Dorm #2: 9/10 Holy crap! this literally looked like a full set for a sec there. Only reason it's not a 10 is bc the 999ec chandelier thing and the rug/499ec throw some of the cohesion off for me