why would you be scared only death is in the dark

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by steelwolfe2, Sep 4, 2012.

  1. I'm glad to find the updates coming again, it's a nice plot twist that u added in there, hope to read more soon...and with more frequency then there was recently...
     
  2. Sandy stares the mirror. Her hair pulled back tight, her glasses pushed up properly, she was even wearing a turtle neck. She wondered if she was being to uptight.
    The door bell rang and sandy ran down stares and opened the door to see Sarah. Sarah was wearing what looked like combat boots, a leather jacket, jeans, and a black tank top with the bands symbol on it, a circle with a spike floating just over the top and two off the sides curving up. Sarah stared at sandy bewildered.
    "Hell no, we are going to a guardians concert! Get back up stares and change right now!" Sarah barked loudly at sandy. Sandy ,in fear, ran up stairs quickly and dug through her closet until she found the shirt Sarah had given her earlier that year.
    Sandy comes back down stairs wearing a sweat shirt covering most of the tight white v-neck t shirt with the guardians symbol on the front in silver.
    ......
    Death stopped and stared at the man who had stepped in front of him.
    "Michael." Death said coldly. His scythe at the ready.
    Michael smirks. "I suppose asking you to stop rebelling would be less than successful."
    .......
    Gabby plays patty cake with shinigami. Anubis stares afraid and confused, images of his young sister bathing in the blood of angels fills his mind.
     
  3. great story, bump
     
  4. Will update tonight
     
  5. Still waiting for an update...I don't like waiting for a good story & this one is great...
     
  6. Since I don't update for Tristan anymore, I don't know if and when he will post .-.
     
  7. And now I do edit for Tristan. Wonderful... I haven't read the last 5 or so updates of the story .-.
     
  8. Sarah pushed her way through the crowd of people to their seats, Sandy following closely behind. Sandy hung her head in shame, apologizing to each person as Sarah shoves past them.

    They finally made to their seats in the front row. Sarah bounced happily as Sandy awe-fully stared around at the amazing seats they had acquired.

    "Um... Sarah? How did you manage to get front row seats at mid stage for one of the biggest concerts of the year?"

    Sarah turned and looked down at Sandy, clear excitement in her eyes.

    "Oh, some woman gave them to me. Who cares? It doesn't matter."

    Just as Sandy was going to ask another question, all the lights turned off and a spot light scanned the audience. Sandy watched it and asked what it was. "Sarah?"

    "They're scanning the audience for two lucky people who get to go back stage right before the show starts. They do it every concert. God! I hope we get picked!"

    The spotlight landed on Sarah and Sandy almost immediately and a security guard opened a gate for them.
    ......

    Izanami-no-Mikoto strides slowly into the hospital behind Anubis.

    "Well hey dog boy. What's up?"

    Anubis looks back at Izanami-no-mikoto.

    "What do you want?"

    "I can't say hi to my brother?"

    "No, you want something."

    She strolls past him

    "Well now you mention it, your life would be nice."

    She spins around and jams Mors' spear through him. Anubis catches his breath as the pain shoots through him. He holds the spear and looks down at it.

    "...Mors...?"

    "That's right. Both Donn and Mors have died at my hands. Fitting, don't you think? The most brutish of us killed by such a beauty as me."

    Anubis falls to the ground and closes his eyes as his last breath escapes him. Then his body turns into a swirling black mist and flys into his swords. Izanami-no-Mikoto laughs into the air.

    "I've done it! I've killed three of them and no one can stop....."

    She's cut off as fear shoots through her.

    "Big brother? Look at all the blood... No more big brother... Izanami-no-Mikoto, let's play a game."
     
  9. I like it...update!!
     
  10. I'm really looking forward to editing the next bit.

    Gooooooooore 
     
  11. Ok I just wrote the update I sent it off to my editor it's longer then what I usually do to try to make up for taking so long it also mixes all the story lines
     
  12. THIS MAY TAKE A WHILE TO EDIT *tears out hair*
     
  13. O.O I want more
     
  14. My editor is lazy
     
  15. Shut up!



    Yeah... I am.
     
  16. Still here waiting for an update.....
     
  17. Hey writer and 'lazy' editor...UPDATE already...I'm getting bored waiting...
     
  18. Patience is a virtue.
     
  19. Patience may be a virtue...but a month and a half is a long time...
     
  20. It's been a month and a half!?