I personally don't like it but it's a good effort. Like that person said, keep writing. I encourage art of all forms. It's much better than posting useless threads or hate threads.
I was being sarcastic. I don't cry . Also, I've been taught writing shouldn't be a form of therapy.
It was good fox, and I'm not sure about the rhyming poem spit...good rhymes and all, but it's nicer if they had some more words to change into a poem