since I'm here...poem

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by LelouchViBritannia-rebellion, Apr 21, 2014.

  1. YOLO
    BOLO
    SOLO
    ROLO
    CHOLO
    MOLO
    TOLO

    OP, what about my poem? Thou like it?
     
  2. I personally don't like it but it's a good effort. Like that person said, keep writing. I encourage art of all forms. It's much better than posting useless threads or hate threads.
     
  3. Fox, I like that.
     
  4. Spit you sensu bean, why'd you leave and not tell me. I had no one to find parties for me
     
  5. No bow! I don't want to leave this thread. It's giving me those happy feels.
     
  6. Thanks, pickles . I like to cry into my pillow and write sad stuff in my spare time.
     
  7. Spit, thy wisdom is great
     
  8. Poetry is boring though
     
  9. I want to post my poetry too now ?
     
  10. The scud is here hiding too
     
  11. Screw you bow, it's NOT. 
     
  12. Really Fox? You just cry and write stuff? Does it make you feel better or?
     
  13. I stick by my status pickles you know that.
     
  14. I was being sarcastic. I don't cry . Also, I've been taught writing shouldn't be a form of therapy.
     
  15.  I know.
     
  16. Why you lying.
    You cry.
    I can tell you do.
    No need to lie.
    We're all friends here.
     
  17. It was good fox, and I'm not sure about the rhyming poem spit...good rhymes and all, but it's nicer if they had some more words to change into a poem
     
  18. Had me up till the more words to change into a poem bit. Can you please elaborate?
     
  19. I had two people to comment on, and I don't know what to change fox lol
     
  20. I think he meant that for Lickity Spit