It takes intelligence to understand when someone is weary at heart, but I guess some people believe intelligence is a hindrance
I get that you're suffering the loss of someone I'm also just being an ass because I can. I actually think your connections in your work are well done.
OP, I think the first one is good. The rest, no. So don't let anyone beat you up over the first poem.
Hell, dudes a few colors shy of a full crayon box, but I liked it. Great references and metaphors, and strangely relatable if one but opens up his/her mind.
I don't have many connections, and I never really want to get close to my family because they really don't understand. I loss a lot of my friends to them moving away, I couldn't contact them so it's like saying they died
Exactly. That's your interpretation. And I got my own. Fix us just close minded and saw nothing in it cause he's arrogant.
To quote someone else without saying who quoted it would make me scum, and being scum is worse than dying (Renji Abarai said the scum part btw)
Firstly, I have a vagina (I took the time to check). Second of all, I am not close-minded. I stated my opinion on what he posted. I, personally, do not find his work amazing. However, I do like the connections to the gods. I think if he stretched it out more the pieces would flow better.
Maybe you could have said that not just say criticism, because criticizing without a real backstory is stupid
You only started to like the connections to his reference with gods when I posted what they meant for me. So, thanks for that compliment. Start giving them to OP, too.
I didnt mean you copied a quote I meant the way you put it together was nice. It could be made into a quote for like a book or movie or something