daddies little girl

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by steelwolfe2, Jul 15, 2012.

  1. Well I suppose your just in a bad mood because you wrote a feed and no one liked it... But Well lots of people like this feed so if you don't mind..... GO AWAY and remember if you have nothing nice to say don't say ANYTHING
     
  2. Actually, Chloe has a point. Grammar is as necessary as the plot. It's called constructive criticism, and this particular story needs a lot.

    Oh yes, and this is _Fyre-Heartz_'s alt 
     
  3. Amazing!!!! 
     
  4. I have bad grammar that wasn't the point though my only objective was to write the story in my head I didnt even care if people like it
     
  5. If I'm in a bad mood, you would be cowering in fear by the hostility I'd be showing towards you and the rest of humanity.

    That, is what happens when I'm in a bad mood. :|
     
  6. A writer's job is to improve. They do it for themselves AND for the readers. If you don't care about whether people like it or not, why write?

    It's just a thought. Not discouraging you or anything.
     
  7. Haha I write because I want to in the end if I ever do anything more with it I will edit the grammar but really I didn't even care if it was a good story I just wanted my idea on paper so to speak.
     
  8. Haha I write because I want to in the end if I ever do anything more with it I will edit the grammar but really I didn't even care if it was a good story I just wanted my idea on paper so to speak.
     
  9. PLEASE DO A SEQUIL!!!
     
  10. Tristan write a sequel or I will stop writing my story.
     
  11. Tash I'm not writing the sequel ok I wrote this because I wanted to and I'm not gonna be bullied into writing something I don't
     
  12. OMGGG I LOVED THIS STORY THE THRILLS AND CHILLS THE FUNNIES PART DADDY'S HOME AWESOMEEE I LOVED IT ESP THE END IT LEFT ME IN SUSPENSE NOT KNOWING WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT
     
  13. Bump!!!! Update plz!!!!
     
  14. The story is finished...
     
  15. I'm writing a new story called kitty cat for those of you interested and no it has nothing to do with this story.
     
  16. This is my story if you want me to update it so you know what happens to Alison let me know
     
  17. HA! THIS COUNTS AS A SEQUEL!