Love Troubles

Ok, here goes nothing. (And please remember this is all freestyle. I don't plan before I write, I only review what I've don't X3)
Hmm... I think I'm gonna switch from 3rd person to 1st. I think that would be easier on me. Sorry this is so confusing 


~~~~Love Troubles~~~~

Ally's POV
**** it...**** it **** it **** it... I think, as I sit in Michael's lap. "You're coming to my house until he comes. And ill send my mom t-"
"No. We are not sending your mother to that **** hole. Send your brother. At least he can protect himself from her. I mean... I'm sure your mom can too buts she's so petite and-" Michael stutters while blushing. I laugh slightly "I knew what you meant, Love" Michael smiles, then out of no where, picks me up bridal style "Hey! Let me go, let me go!" I yell, while laughing. "Nah," he says as he slings me over his shoulder instead, "This is more fun!" I playfully hit him on his back as he starts walking away. "Come on, were just going to your house!" He exclaims. I sigh and give up and let him carry me

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We reach my house and he knocks on the door, still carrying me. "Oh!" My mother says, laughing at the sight in front of her. "Michael... You do realize she is in a dress..." My mother points out. He and I soon begin to blush furiously. "I uh... I didn't... Uh...-" he begins to stutter. My mother laughs again, then shakes her head. "Come on"

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He sets me down inside and we walk hand in hand to go to my brother, Alex, room. I knock, and he answers in nothing but his boxers "Wudduh ya want?" He sleepily asks. I laugh then respond "we need you to pick up Michaels things from his house tomorrow. He was... Kicked out" I finish. "Oh yeah? Hmm....." Alex begins. "No" and slams his door. I stand there, shocked, and begin to tear up. Michael wraps his arms around me and try's to soothe me. "It's ok Baby, it's ok. We'll find someone else" he murmurs, as we walk to my room.

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Well, that's it for now. I was kinda in a rush
 
Darn, I just realized in the first update, I said ally called and in the second, I said she texted. Just pretend she texted the whole time please. Thanks -3-
 
Ok. So... Here goes nothing. This one is going to be more difficult for me.


~~~~Love Troubles~~~~

Alex's POV

I can't believe it. My idiotic sister expected me to help her lame *** boyfriend. Has she forgotten that I hate him? That I know he doesn't deserve her? Well.... **** it. I guess she could've. I haven't told her since she started dating him. God, I'm such an *** hole! I slammed the door in her face and yelled at her! I have to make this right! I think, before slowly walking out the door. I walked towards Ally's room and listened. All I hear is crying. Her crying. I quietly knock and wait. Nothing. So I slowly open to door. What I see makes me angry and upset all in one. I see them cuddling on her bed, sleeping. And she is crying in her sleep. I slowly walk over and write a note. I'm sorry. I shouldn't have snapped. I will help. it reads. I set it on the side table and move to caress Ally's cheek, when Michael grabs my wrist. He pulls me towards him and growls in my ear, "Don't you EVER do anything her hurt her again!" Then suddenly lets go, and I almost fall on top of them. I glare at him, then walk out the door and lay in my bed. **** it...

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Michaels POV

He hurt her. He made her upset. He mustn't get away with it. I think, as Ally and I snuggle down onto her bed. She's crying by now, but she somehow falls asleep. Yet she's still crying... Anyways, I hear Alex knock gently on the door, so I pretend to be sleeping. He walks in, writes a note, then moves to caress Ally. I grab his wrist and threaten him. I suddenly let go and he nearly falls before he glares at me and walks away. I will be keeping an eye on him.

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Well I think this one ended up running short, but I have plans. I hope this I ok and I do believe I will stick with 1st person. :3
 
Alrighty. Here goes nothing. Ill try, but now that I possibly have Alex's POV, it may get harder. Lol


~~~~Love Troubles~~~~

Ally's POV

I wake up, and I am still crying. Michael senses that I am awake and leans close to my ear. "It's ok Baby, it's ok." He whispers, then dries my eyes. "How come you didn't wake me? We missed dinner," I say back. "That's ok. Your mother is making breakfast at the moment. Want to go downstairs?" He replies. I nod my head, but when I go to get up, my head starts hurting and I lay back down. I look at him, and slowly shake my head. He slides out of bed, then carefully lifts me up bridal style. "Is this ok?" He whispers. I nod again, and grab a note that was on my bedside table. "Baby! Alex says he's sorry and that he'll help!" I exclaim. He scowls, then starts to walk out of my room. He slowly and carefully walks down the stairs, mindful of my head. He then sets my on a chair at the table, pushes my chair in, and sits in a chair next to me. "Well good morning sleepy heads!" My mother exclaims. I slightly wince, then smile and reply, "Good morning, Mother. What's for breakfast today?" She motions to the stove and says, "Bacon, eggs, toast, and pancakes." Michael laughs and says with a joking tone, "What's the occasion?" "Well... Why do I need an occasion to make a big breakfast? Now Ally, go get your brother," I sigh, and go to get up, when Michael puts a hand on my shoulder, looks at me, and shakes his head. He then walks up the stairs himself and knocks on Alex's door. I hear a whispered argument and slowly make my way to the stairs, deciding to crawl up. They don't notice me until Im right in front of them, and by that time Alex is holding Michael by the collar. "What are you doing?! Let go of him!" I nearly yell, as I get up a little too quickly, push Alex away, then fall backwards into Michael. "Woah!" He says, before catching me. By this point I am nearly in tears from the pain and he caresses my hair. "Let go of her!" Alex yells, making my cringe and fall to the floor. Alex kneels down by me and holds me in his lap. Then again, I'm barely conscious at this moment. I could've been mistaken

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Alex's POV

I heard them leave her room. I just keep replying what happened last night. I can't believe Michael threatened me. Ugh. Wait... One pair of footsteps? I peek out the door to see him carry her down. Oh give me a break. He's doing that to show off. Oh! She's seen my note. That must mean she's seen my apology. Good. At least he didn't hide the note I lay back down and wait. I know she'll be coming up to get me for breakfast. Hopefully he'll be busy. I hear a strong knock on my door. whaa? That's not Ally. She's always tentative in case I'm busy or getting dressed. I walk to the door and open it to see Michael. He harshly whispers, "I'm watching you!" I go red with fury. I grab his collar and sternly whisper "No! I'm watching you! I glance over Ally? Why is she crawling? "What are you doing?! Let go of him!" She screams at me. She pushes me back and falls into Michael. "Woah!" He says, catching he and comforting her. "Let go of her!" I scream. She cringes and falls to the floor. What the hell is going on? I fall down next to her and hold her head in my lap. She's barely conscious. I'm not sure how Mom hasn't heard. "Mom!" I yell. She comes running upstairs "Oh my god! What happened? Oh never mind! Come on, come on. Get her in the car!" She babbles "Where are we going?" I stupidly ask. "The hospital. Come!" She replies

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Well, I don't think this update came up to par. But leave comments and advice please :3
 
I like the update Cat :) A double posting a day would be nice if possible. Maybe delve more into why Alex and Michael are hostile toward each other? Just a suggestion...I'm loving the story. Keep it up :D
 
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