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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Flubberj (01), Mar 10, 2012.
I sit next to him, singing lightly, smirking at his expression.
Zack-we finish playing and i smiled suprised at you- You are an angel arent you?
"Angels don't kill people." I smile, pushing him over playfully.
Zack-smiles and laughs a bit- Then your a mermaid?
"Sure. A mermaid." I grin, leaning over him, and I kiss him. (Nigahiga, right?)
(nah just created it) Zack-smiles and puts my arms around you kissing you deeply-
() I kiss down his throat, holding his hand tightly
Zack-i smile and start kissing you passionately and lovingly-
I shiver, and kiss him deeply.
Zack-i smile and kiss you from the top of your neck to your collar passionately-
"Zack…" I say quietly, gazing at him.
Zack-Raven?
"I love you…" I murmur, before my eyes go blank. (What's this? )
Zack-i look at you worriedly and i take you to the doctor-
I let him take me, not speaking.
Zack-takes you to the doctor while yelling : DOCTOR!!
*walks in* what's wrong with her
Zack-i dont know.....she fainted... -strokes Raven's hair-
Shit!
I blink, blankly looking at the both of them.