You're One of Us

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  1. This is really good Please continue
     
  2. Chapter 18: ***** Down

    Aly finally came to a walk as she neared the front doors. Her body in major pain and she felt like she was going to throw up. She neared a group of giggling, staring girls (who were obviously the bitch group) and passed them quickly. Suddenly, one of the girls feet came out of nowhere and Aly fell to the ground. She felt like the air was sucked out and she quickly let out a scream of pain, clutching her ribs. The security guards at the door 50 feet away quickly turned to the fallen girl, but then quickly turned away as one of the girls leaned towards Aly acting as if she was helping her up. She quickly signaled her group to walk away and left herself alone with Aly.

    This girl was obviously the alpha of the pack, and Aly had always hated her with a passion, even though Cody loved her. It was Zoey. Zoey quickly knelt down to Aly and began giggling. "Word is the attack was on you... True or not true?" She asked quickly. Aly quickly nodded and began tearing up once again. "Annnnnd you are pretty much the school virgin, correct?" Zoey asked innocently again. Aly glanced at Zoey confusingly and nodded in agreement. Zoey quickly moved closer to Aly and brought her voice to a wisper. "I bet you loved every single second of it then... I bet YOU wished that guy never stopped. I bet YOU screamed in enjoyment! I BET this whole crap load of crying is fake! YOU loved it, and you wish that guy never stopped I bet!!!" Zoey said as she got louder and louder, until she was yelling.

    Aly began slowly getting up and Zoey kicked her back down, and kicked her ribs. Aly screamed in pain and the guards finally began walking towards the two girls. Zoey quickly began walking away and Aly quickly got up. Rage boiled up inside Aly and she quickly clenched her fists.

    Aly began sprinting towards Zoey and quickly grabbed her hair and threw her against the lockers. Zoey tried grabbing for Aly's hair, but Aly quickly punched her hard in the face. Zoey quickly punched Aly's stomach and she threw Zoey on the ground. Zoey cried out in pain as she held her face. Aly raised her arm one last time, but security guards quickly grabbed her. She screamed in pain as the officers slammed her against the lockers. She quickly kicked and pushed the two officers away and darted down to the main doors.

    Aly finally reached them and punched the OPEN button. She sprinted to her car, clutching at her stomach and ribs. Finally, she jumped in and found her spare keys in the hidden compartment. The officers were running towards the car and Aly quickly sped off. She rounded the parking lot corner, and sped out of the school grounds. She knew where she was going to go...
     
  3. Can I go too? Too where ever it is you are going.....
     
  4. Not you but, oh you know what I mean xD
     
  5. Lol  ill see what i can do haha where have you been? Should I call you Joey now 
     
  6. Lmao CHARLIE THATS WHERE YOU WENT!!!!!!!!! Reset buddies  it's Qin
     
  7. Lol I've been going on trips a lot so I haven't been on much. And no call me Charlie xD


    :0ohmygosh *glomps Qin*  reset buddies
     
  8. Chapter 19: Cemetery

    Aly finally arrived where she desired to be. The last time she had been here, was the second worst day of her life. The first worst day was the day of the killings. The second, was the terrible burials. Today was officially the third worst possible day of her short life.

    Aly quickly parked in the empty parking lot and looked in her car mirror. Her bruised face was chalk white, mixed with huge black and purple spotted bruises. Her left side of her face was swelling and she felt as if her whole stomach and lungs were going to explode. She slowly got out of her car and took a few steps while clutching her stomach. She suddenly felt something come up in her mouth and fell to the ground. She suddenly threw up and stared at the red colored, smelly fluids. "Well I suppose that isn't supposed to look like that..." Aly quickly mumbled. She slowly pulled herself up and stumbled into the graveyard. Deep in the graveyard she finally came to where she wished to be. She finally felt the tingling in her legs and arms begin and she fell next to the grave.

    "Hi... Dad" Aly calmly wispered. She took deep breaths and closed her eyes. "Yea... I know you can't talk to me, but I felt like it was the right thing to come here." Aly quickly became sweaty and she began coughing up blood. "Im hurt dad... I wish you were here to help me. I always thought I was going to take over your place, and you know, rule the world..." Aly slowly chuckled and winced in pain.

    "I'm going to die today dad. I guess i'll see you soon... You know it's kinda funny" Aly wispered while painfully laughing, "I always thought you were going to grow old and walk me down the isle, be at the hospital when I have children, babysit them, watch me take over the world just like you and the others did... Now look where we are! Being killed off one by one. Who do you think will be next?"

    Aly slowly attempted opening her eyes again as she coughed up more blood. "Daddy... I'm going to die happy. I have regrets, but who doesn't? My biggest regret is never speaking up to someone that I love. Dad... I... I love... Love..." Aly quickly broke off in air taking coughs and fell on her back, staring at the sky. She slowly closed her eyes and screamed in pure agony as she clutched her stomach. This is was how it was going to end... Just a few hours ago she was the happiest girl, and now she's lying here.
     
  9. :eek: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
    DONT DIEE
     
  10. Chapter 20: Search

    "Zane... If Aly isn't dead yet, Cody is so going to kill her for kicking Zoey's ass." Charlie quickly said as Zane sped up to 85 miles per hour.

    "Not the time to tell me that Charlie!" Zane yelled as he focused on the road.
    "She thinks It was me Zane... She thinks I was the one that hurt her" Charlie quickly said as he rested his head against the car window. "She looked like death Zane..."

    "Charlie! Do you have any idea what happened to her?! Just shut up!" Zane quickly yelled as he sped up to 90 mph.
    "Where the hell are we going Zane? How do you magically know she is going to be wherever you are going?" Charlie asked demandingly as he glared at Zane.
    "Im going to the last place she would ever want to be Charlie!" Zane answered defensively. Charlie's face instantly grew white as he finally understood where they are going.
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    Zane quickly parked the car and Charlie and him quickly exited. Charlie began quickly walking to the graveyard and Zane suddenly pushed him. "What the hell!" Charlie yelled quickly. Zane quickly pointed to the ground and they both saw bloody red vomit.
    "Charlie..." Zane wispered shakingly, "go get help. Now."

    Charlie instantly began sprinting down the road and Zane sprinted into the graveyard. "ALY!!!" Zane quickly yelled. He sprinted deep into the graveyard and came to a stop at his parents graves. He repeated screaming Aly's name loudly and took deep breaths. "This can't be happening... No..." he wispered to himself. Zane quickly looked to his left and finally saw her. He quickly sprinted to Aly and skidded to a stop. Her body was so white that her bruises couldnt be seen.

    "Z...Zane?" Aly asked shakingly as she attempted grabbing for his hand, but failed. Zane could hear fain sirens in the distance and he grabbed Aly's face.
    "Shhhhh... Don't talk. Aly, you're going to be ok. I promise that i'm getting you out of here alive." Zane said as he held Aly's hand. Aly looked up into Zane's eyes and everything suddenly went to white and Zane fizzled out of Aly's vision. Aly heard screams and felt Zane's hand leave hers. The blinding white soon turned to pure blackness and Aly suddenly felt shocks go throughout her body.
     
  11. Sorry if  chapter is bad its 3:00 am and I'm tired but really felt like writing something 
     
  12. :0 he was maddd
     
  13. Hello it's shandi0707 I reset hehe
     
  14. Shandi!!! Hey!!! I'll try to write an update tomorrow  goodnight everyone!
     
  15.  this story! U must be a gifted writer!
     
  16. Can't wait for the rest :)
     
  17. Chapter 21: Hospitals

    "Oh my gosh I hate hospitals" Charlie mumbled as he grabbed Starbucks coffe at the hospital cafeteria. He quickly walked away with the agreeing Zane and began walking towards the elevator.

    "Three cracked ribs, punctured lung, concussion, kidney transplant, and stomach pumped" Zane stated out of the blue as he stood in the elevator alone with Charlie. "How the fuck did she survive man? And how the hell did none of us notice she was seriously hurt?" Zane asked Charlie quickly. Charlie quickly shrugged and looked at Zane.
    "The question is, why didn't she tell anyone she was hurt?" Charlie asked as he took a sip of his coffee innocently. Zane pounded his head on the elevator wall and quickly walked out with Charlie as it opened.

    "Three days and she is still asleep. Doesn't that fall under the coma stage Charlie?" Zane mumbled as he drank his vanilla coffee.
    "Mehh... She isn't on life support. I say you should be very grateful that she isn't a vegetable and pretty much brain dead" Charlie answered as they slowly walked closer to Aly's hospital room.
    "Oh believe me, I'm grateful Charlie" Zane stated as they turned for the door to Aly's hospital room. "Holy shit..." Zane wispered as his coffee dropped out of his hand onto the floor. It quickly spilt all over Charlie's shoes and Charlie grew angry.

    "What the hell Zane!!!" Charlie yelled as he turned towards Zane. Zane quickly grabbed Charlie's jaw with one hand and turned it towards the room. "Holy shit is right Zane..." Charlie wispered softly as he also dropped his coffee. They both looked out at Aly's bed and saw her beautiful blue eyes staring up at them. She slowly blinked at both of them and sat up cautiously.
    "Where am I?" Aly asked demandingly.
     
  18. My shoes!!!! 