You're One of Us

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *blondie11 (01), Jul 5, 2011.

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    BREAKING NEWS! TERRORIST ATTACK ON FAMOUS SCHOOL?
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    Yesterday, a series of brutal crimes took place at one of the most advanced, best, and safest school in america. Ares Private School (APS) was home to over 700 students ranging from the years of 12-18. Students say at about noon, an intercom came on and everyone heard popping sounds. Thinking it was just a senior prank, the students went back to work. Some students new better though. A senior classroom in biology soon blocked the doors after their teacher left the room to investigate. A student who was shot in that classroom said an act of heroism came from two very known students across the world; Zane Bachevlik and Aly Ivanov. They ended up working together, and taking down almost 27 different attackers, with the help of Zane's brother; Charlie Bachevlik, and former friend Jake Wentz. Together, these heroic teenagers are said to have saved hundreds of lives.

    The names seem reconizable, do they not? The Bachevlik and Ivanov families were part of an elite group of three families called The Invincible Family. The other family is the Monttier family, consisting of Gabby and Michelle. Everyone knows the parents were killed in an attack, years ago at their Russian home. But the question you are all asking now is; were all these attacks lately on the Family just a coincidence? Or was it a debt being paid off by some visious gang? Only the remainder survivor of the Family can tell us... Aly Ivanov.

    All that was given out to the press was who died, and who was said to be an attacker. In total, 64 kids and 32 staff members were slaughtered, bringing this attack to the worst in American history of deaths. Some attackers did live, and are being investigated, one by one at this very moment. Aly Ivanov is said to be unresponsive after the death of her said to be former boyfriend, Zane Bachevlik. The truth will catch up to all of us soon.... So now the waiting game begins.
     
  2. Bad reporter. Harrassing Aly. Poor Aly.
     
  3. "Aly... Sweetie, you gotta tell us what happened" the investigator asked sweetly as he reached for her hand. Aly immediately swiped the hand away and sat back in her chair depressingly.

    "I want to go home..." Aly whispered. Those were the first words she had spoken since the day before. "I can't stay here. Please let me go..."

    "Hun, you know we can't do that. We don't know if you are metally stable to be able to let you live alone. We don't even know if something like this will happen again to you. Which is why you need to tell us EVERYTHING" the investigator calmly demanded.

    "Everything?" Aly whispered quietly as she looked up. Everyone in the room slowly nodded and Aly began crying. "You guys couldn't handle it!" Aly yelled as she remembered everything. The investigator grabbed her hand.

    "It takes us one step to finding the people in charge of all of these attacks. You need to tell us every detail Aly of your life the past 2 1/2 years" the investigator said denandingly. Aly quickly wiped her tears away and took a deep breath and began telling her story.
     
  4. Lurv lurv lurv
     
  5. Aly told them all about how Zane and her were always secretly involved, and everything about him and her. She told them about the sexual assault details, the party, the major drinking, the wild sex, the attacks, the love and hate relationships. She told them about Adam, Calum, Cody, Zoey, and Michelle, and all the other attackers. She told them absolutely everything about anything they asked. When they asked how Zane died, everyone burst into tears having the image stuck in their head. She told them about the necklace the police took away from her as evidence. She told them about everything Zane and her had done, or were going to do. She told them absolutely everything. The one thing she didn't talk about though, was the secret room connected to her and Zane's room. She needed to keep that a secret for a reason.

    She finally stopped telling at when they were dragging her away from Zane's body. The investigator actually told her to stop there. Everyone in the room was crying and many people looked at her in pity. The investigator turned back to Aly and stared at her. "Why the fuck did you not tell us any of this long ago?!" he yelled, "you should have came to the police or something way long ago!" The investigator quickly stood up and walked out of the room angrily as he threw a chair.

    Police men grabbed Aky out of the chair and dragged her through the filled halls and stuffed her in a tight room. She cried and cried until she thought she couldn't no longer. She wished she could just be a normal teenager, with a normal life, with a normal boyfriend, with a normal relationship. She had no one now. She got word that Jake lived, but it paralized from the waist down, and that he doesn't want to see her face ever again.
     
  6. Jake doesn't want to see Aly?
     
  7. The Family is like the reason he got shot... I would be a pretty pissed of person too if I was Jake  that's why I wrote it 
     
  8. Poor Aly Poor Zane.

    I'm actually crying
     
  9. Imagine writing it  I hated writing it because Zane is my now ex boyfriend in real life... Which ummmm sucks majorly. And before anyone asks; NO we were never that close  im 14 and definately not doing anything like that.
     
  10. I died  and poor Jake!!! He's a cripple now!! 
     
  11. This could be published!!!
     
  12. Aly sat by Zane's grave and slowly dropped red and white roses upon it. Tears fell down her cheeks as she stared at the roses and cried silently to herself. She couldn't imagine living without him and she breathed heavingly as she fell back on the ground, staring at the black, cloudy sky. "Remember when we would sit in the snow together at the Berlin home, and stare at the stars in the beautiful sky?" Aly whispered. She knew she wouldn't recieve a response but she kept going. "Remember when... Remember when..." Aly cried out as she closed her eyes and cried loudly. She turned around and pounded the ground, "why did you save me?! WHY?!" Aly screamed out as she sat up and wiped off the dirt on her dress. She slowly wiped the tears from her eyes and drew a heart in the dirt.

    "We'll be together again Zane. Someday... You'll just have to wait for me, and I'll wait for you, I promise" Aly quietly said as she sat up and blew a kiss at the grave. "I'll protect myself... Trust me Zane. Our secrets aren't entirely out, and I'm opening the door to them soon. Don't worry about me..." Aly whispered as she began walking out of the graveyard.
     
  13. great story! Aly should be pregnant with his son or daughter.. But so much betrayal
     
  14. Well if she got pregnant it would be too much like my last story... Updates later, movie night with a few friends 
     
  15. Sorry I haven't read any of your other stories, I just recently started reading fan fic. But something has to be left of Zane and Aly
     
  16. That's what I thought too  but then i was like... Nah. I have a few plans, no worries haha  And welcome to Fan Fiction!!!
     
  17. Looking forward to it and thanks
     
  18. Jake stared out of the hospital bedroom window in sadness and longing. He missed so many people and things. Frusteration flew through his body as he tried moving his wheel chair. He missed his legs so much, and he cried out in frusteration. He could never again run, stand, swim, he could never do anything again. No woman would ever love him. He was a cripple, a person who was nothing to the world. People would stare at him constantly, wondering; how had this come upon him. He would of course tell his sad story, hopefully inspiring people.

    Regret was sadly killing him. He told his best friend to die, and he wished this upon himself. Almost everyone in his life was gone; vanished in thin air, in a blink of an eye. One person remained though, and that person was in an entirely different world in her mind. He knew that Aly changed. He had seen hundreds of pictures of her on the tv and just seeing her face, he could tell that she was no longer the same Aly. Her beautiful, sparkling blue eyes were dark, saddened, pitiful eyes. Her hair grew slightly a few shades darker and her face was always puffy from crying. He knew the press constantly harrassed her, and Jake over time relized he was the lucky one. Her face came on the tv again and he saw somethig different in her eyes. Hatred... Longing... Revenge... Something was ignited in her eyes.

    He finally stopped dazing off and began wheeling out of the room and to the elevator. Something was happening with her. Something dangerous.
     
  19. The night was dark, and slightly chilly. No sounds came from the Texan estate except the even breathing of Aly. She slept quietly in her bedroom, alone and depressed. Occasionally she would reach over in her sleep, attempting to grab anything possible. Countless nights Zane slept next to her, and now with every reach it became clear to her that he was truly gone.

    A loud bang quickly sounded and Aly opened her eyes suddenly, and shot up on of the bed. She slowly glanced at the dark shadow at the door and her heart began to beat fast. The shadow figure calmly stepped out of the shadows and began walking towards Aly as she gasped loudly and crawled forward on the bed. "Zane?!" Aly whispered as he grabbed her face in the palm of his hands and pushed her back on the bed.

    "I came as soon as I could..." Zane whispered as he kissed her lips hard. She slowly ran her hands up his shirt and felt his wonderful warm skin once again. Zane slowly ran his lips down to her neck and bit it softly. "Oh Aly, how I've missed you so much over the past few weeks" Zane wispered as he moved back up to her lips and she bit his bottom lip.

    "You can't leave me Zane... You can't" Aly cried out as she wrapped her legs with his legs.

    "I have to go soon though..." Zane whispered as he ran his hand up her shirt slightly. "We will be together someday Aly... You need to do what you desire, and only you know what that is" Zane whispered into her ear as she wrapped her arms around him. "I have to go sweetie..."

    "No! Please Zane... You can't!" Aly yelled as he began to fade.

    "I love you..." Zane whispered as his voice became faint and his whole body faded.

    Aly quickly opened her eyes and sat up in bed. She slowly grabbed her face and cried silently. "It was only a dream..." she cried as she grabbed her pillow and fell back in the bed. She screamed and yelled until her lungs gave out and she soon stood out of bed and stormed to her closet.
     
  20. You should make somebody come back from the dead :0
    Cause that totally happens all the time :D