You're One of Us

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *blondie11 (01), Jul 5, 2011.

  1. Can I die? :D I like dramatically dying
     
  2. Lol wooow Charlie 
     
  3. Wowww!!!! This is amazing!! Don't ever stop
     
  4. So intense  Keep going it's great 
     
  5. Hours went by and Aly finally crawled out of the shower. She quickly stumbled to the closet and grabbed pajamas out of one of the corners. Tears streamed down her cheeks as she grabbed one of the shelves to hoist her up. She slowly took deep breaths and finally stopped crying. A rustle quickly came behind her, but she didn't even flinch. "Aly...?" Zane wispered as he grabbed her waist. She slowly turned around and faked a smile.

    "Hi..." Aly wispered as she grabbed Zane's hand and leaned back against the shelves. Zane slowly ran his hand across Aly's warm cheek and stared into her eyes.

    "You've been crying... Haven't you?" Zane wispered as he made Aly sit on the carpeted closet floor. She slowly nodded and looked down. He grabbed her chin and raised it slightly and looked into her eyes. "What happened?" Zane wispered. Aly quickly moved forward and fell into Zane's arms and hugged him tightly.

    "I love you more than anything else in this world Zane..." Aly wispered as she kissed the side of his face. Zane slowly took a deep breath and kissed Aly's lips.

    "Words can't even describe my love for you Aly..." Zane wispered as he broke the kiss. They quickly leaned forward and began kissing once again. Aly slowly broke the kiss and leaned back as she took a deep breath. Zane half smiled and grabbed her hand. "So when are you going to tell me the truth?" Zane asked as he squeezed her hand.

    "The truth will catch up to us soon..." Aly wispered as she closed her eyes.
     
  6. This is craaaazy intense

































    I like it.








    But I changed my mind, I'm not writing it down.


















    Good story















    Try to add me in I'll b bad if I have to.
    Cam Rider
    5'2" any age
    Brown hair with natural highlights, tan
    Normally wears tanks, cargo shorts, and converse.
    Is a rock climber, so rough hands.
    Got into a climbing accident, so there is a long scar going down her right arm.
    Won't take anything from anyone, is willing to hurt someone if they tick her off too much.
    Courageous, Daring, and Sly.
     
  7. You will be in my next story if I ever write one  just keep reminding me or you wont be in...
     
  8. Thx... Great so far. I wanted to write it down so I could show it to my friends at school. But I have too much finger pain bc of rock climbing, and writing my other fan fic down( spy school, Escape!)...it's just too much. 
     
  9. You can write it down, but don't take credit for it or I will hunt you down and make your life miserable  I'm and evil little one aren't I? Haha and you rock climb? That's so cool!
     
  10. Yea I rock climb...don't worry, I'm not gonna write anything down.
     
  11. I'm kidding about the whole "miserable life thing" haha I'm a nice person, so no worries  oh yea btw I will only be updating at night because I am working all week during the day!
     
  12. Haha. Same here...except the rents don't-------nvm
     
  13. This is nite?
     
  14. Aly woke up in her bed and heard the news on the TV playing. She slowly sat up and rubbed her eyes as she adjusted to the light. She finally could see clearly and looked infront of her to see Zane sitting shirtless, watching the TV intently. Aly quickly lunged for the remote as she finally noticed the news report was about the finding of Doctor Salvatore's body in a ditch on the side of the road.

    Zane quickly grabbed her body and threw her on the ground. He quickly got ontop of her and covered her mouth as she screamed loudly. "You better tell me what the fuck is going on right now Aly!" Zane yelled as he glared angrily at her.

    "Get off of me!" Aly yelled as she bit his hand and flipped him over on the hardwood floor. Zane lunged for her shoulders and pinned her down to the ground as he yelled in frusteration.

    "You killed him!" Zane yelled with tears in his eyes as he looked at the one person he thought he loved.

    "I didn't kill him!" Aly cried out as tears fell down her face.

    "Then tell me what happened!" Zane yelled as he pressed against her body. "You have to trust me Aly..." Zane wispered angrily.

    "And you need to trust me Zane!" Aly yelled angrily, "I saw him die! I saw him killed right infront of me! Everyone we know and love is going to die. Calum is going to die, then Jake, then every single friend who could possibly know anything about us, then the rest of our family... Then... Then they will kill you Zane!!!" Aly yelled as she cried even louder. "All of this... it's making us crazy Zane. Look at you now, you're hurting me..." Aly wispered angrily as she glared at him. Zane slowly crawled off her and held his face in his hands as he cried quietly.

    Aly quickly turned to her side and sobbed louder and louder until pounding quickly hit the bedroom door.
     
  15. Charlie and Gabby quickly burst through the door and turned the corner to see Aly laying on the floor, sobbing loudly, and Zane staring at her in shock. "What did you do to her!" Charlie yelled as he picked Zane up off the ground. No response left his lips and Charlie quickly slammed him against the bedroom wall. "WHAT DID YOU DO?!" Charlie yelled louder as he stared into Zane's eyes.

    "I didn't do anything!" Zane yelled as he pushed Charlie away and ran out of the room, running down the hallway. Charlie quickly brought his attention to Aly and stood over her with Gabby.

    Gabby slowly bent down and touched Aly's shoulder. "Aly... What happened?" Gabby wispered as she bent closer to her. Aly quickly threw her hands up and hit Gabby's face.

    "GET OUT!!!" Aly piercingly screamed as she backed away from the fallen Gabby. Charlie quickly grabbed Gabby's hands and led her out of the room as Aly yelled louder and louder.

    The door finally closed and Aly quickly screamed as the images of Doctor Salvatore's dead corpse entered her mind again. She quickly grabbed at her head and screamed as she looked up at the ceiling as her ears began to hear piercing rings in them.

    Aly quickly stood up and immediately reached for the TV and pushed it off the shelf it was standing on and it quickly crashed to ground and a loud crash followed it. She slowly fell to the ground and held her head once again. She pounded her fists on the ground in anger and attempted taking deep breaths as her heart began to race.
     
  16. you hit me. You bitch. 
     
  17. Gasp. Go onnnn
     
  18. Then Zane dramatically dies and aly goes on a killing spree for revenge 