Well then I'll assume the role of editor because I see some grammatical and spelling errors. while I'm at it, I think I'll beat you up Otto :twisted:
Sophie was worried, Dan was supposed to get to the house with the supplies hours ago... Just then there was a knock at the door, Epic answered it. "Who the hell are you?!" A voice shouted. There was a whirring sound then Epic was sent flying back. Sophie saw Epic soaring through the doorframe, and into the lounge, he landed on his back. "Ow! That hurt" Epic said to himself "Epic! How many times have I told you? Don't answer the door to anyone!" Sophie said accusingly. someone sped through the doorframe and lunged at Epic with his bare hands. Epic rolled out of the way at the way at the last second, causing the attacker to punch the floor with a lot of force. The pain was visible in his face. "Dan, leave him alone!" Sophie said sternly and instructively. The attacker looked up at Sophie. "Who is this?" He pointed at Epic "This is Epic, he's from Earth"Sophie said "You know, the guy I told you about!" "Oh, this is him!" Dan said sounding surprised and embarrassed at the same time. "I'm Dan, a friend of Sophie's" "Sophie said she was your cousin..." Epic looked at Dan, confused. "Cousin? Sophie! What did you tell him?!" Dan laughed "Never mind that. Did you bring the medicine?" Sophie asked "No, because medicine does nothing for burns. So I brought the proper supplies for treating burns." Dan walked out, then re-entered the room with a small box. He opened it. Inside was a full first-aid kit, he took out a roll of bandages. "Who's first?" Dan asked "Me, because strangely enough, Epic wasn't burned at all" Sophie said. "Ok, where are the burns?" Dan asked "On my back..." Sophie answered Dan smiled "Ok, I'll need you to take your top..." "No." Sophie interrupted " I'll do it myself." Dan suddenly looked disappointed, but gave Sophie the bandages. Sophie walked upstairs. A few minutes passed... "Back in a bit, need the toilet" Epic said, then walked upstairs and toward the bathroom. He opened the door, had a p*ss in the toilet, then as he turned around to walk out. He saw Sophie with her top off. (She still had her bra on) Her face was completely red, so was Epic's he hadn't noticed her. Had she watched from the second walked in the bathroom? He was completely embarrassed. "Erm... Have you been watching me?" Epic said Silence... "Ok" Epic sped out of the bathroom, he thought Sophie would have been in her room...