Your World

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *EpicFire15 (01), Apr 20, 2011.

  1. Qin, why do you search out for a comment I make just so you can try to belittle me
     
  2. It looks fun... (ーー;)
     
  3. WHERES THE STORY!!!!!!! GRR
     
  4. STORY GAAAAAAARRRRRGAAAAARR
     
  5. My name is Archee Mysaki , Im in the 6th grade . I have brown hair and brown eyes. Danny is not only my friend but also my boyfriend. I have a 9 year old sister named Kalistria , I call her Kali. Im friends with a girl named Alexis Hallikara, from 4th grade , she was in my class then. My friend is also kind of Sheldon. A boy in my class , Patrick Lopez , mostly an idiot.
     
  6. Just saying Archee, you post who you want to be and your description. Not your whole class. -_-
     
  7. Um that is my descrip minus the extra
     
  8. Well then don't post the extra -_- except like maybe your sister wait not even!
     
  9. Yea. Uhm you don't no how many pedos and pervs play this
     
  10. Just cause u told me not to Il redo it Dan cause u asked an i mad at u.

    Dalmerin
    13
    From planet Hive
    Power: Control water
    Black hair
    Blue eyes
     
  11. We are gonna start writing again
     
  12. Epic was fighting against Otto first, then fletch. He felt himself getting stronger. The war was in a coupla days. Epic became more peaceful over the days. He met his fellow soldiers, he trained, learned more skills. But he missed Sophie. He finally kissed her, and now he was in this mess.
    Otto took advantage of Epic's brooding, and put his sword to epic's chest.
    'kid, focus.' he said and walked off.

    Apoc sat in the chair, Ben having recently reported to him. His Royal Army filed out.
    'they will attack soon. I told Ben that you will arrive in a week. So they will attack before that. Then, when you "arrive" you'd have to listen to the 2 new kings. Clever, that Otto is, I gotta admit. But he doesn't know my power. I set a seed of betrayal in his friend's brain. He has no choice, eventually he will turn. If he's really strong, it can take months for him to act.'
    Cyber was horrified at this. He had to tell Ben. They were friends. But that would be going against the king's rules. And king Apoc always found out........

    Sophie and Dan were sitting by themselves.
    'should we call her?' Dan asked.
    'no.'
    'you sure?'
    'yes'
    'Syd's my friend.'
    'I don't care.'
    'come on. Why do you hate her?'
    'I don't, I'm just too upset to think at the moment. Epic's been gone awhile now.'
    'I know.'Dan said consolingly.
    'I just wanna know if he's ok.'
    'I'm sure he's fine. He's been in this type of situation before, right?'
    'yeah. But that was another weaker subordinate. These are the top two.'


    I felt like I had to make up for what I missedhopefully it's fine with what epic had in mind.
     
  13. It's great! I'm glad you did the next bit, 'cause I couldn't get any useful ideas. Dx
     
  14. Epic where the he'll you been
     
  15. I went to visit my dad in Weymouth and forgot my iPod
     
  16. I'm in process of writing, but it'll take a while cuz I'm busy
     
  17. the day before the Royal Army "arrives"

    'send five of your men at each post. Make sure they hide. There are Ten regular guards at each of the four doors A's well.' said Apoc to the chief of the Royal Army. 'we don't want Otto being suspicious.'

    The entire army walked out.
    'so, epic, since you're a leader of one of our squads, do you remember the plan?' asked fletch.
    'sure. I lead the attack from the back, right?'
    'right. Ben has the west gate, I have the east gate, and Otto gets the north gate. You get the south gate, cuz behind it is the slum district. They are so poor, they don't have the spirit to rebel.'
    'so I take the tunnel labeled.......' epic began.
    'south gate, dumbass. It goes around the main castle. But you will stick with me until I have to exit at the east gate. Otto will stick with us A's well....'

    Epic opened up the hatch, and turned on the suit that Otto made. He disappeared. The other 25 men came up and did the same thing. Otto had 24 men, since he was most powerful.
    'is everyone up?' he asked
    'sir yes sir!' said the men.
    And they kept on walking........