Your World

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *EpicFire15 (01), Apr 20, 2011.

  1. Why? is something wrong with me reading it?
     
  2. No, I just thought u stopped
     
  3. Lol I don't usually comment but I just wanted you to keep writing this story but yes im still reading
     
  4. Yes of course im reading all your stories your a good writer
     
  5. Otto smiled. Apoc was so generous: get the intruder or him and fletch'd have to attend a public execution, and not A's guests wanting to watch. He assembled the army, they surrounded Sophie's house. There was no way they could escape.BOOM! First shot. Missed. BOOM! Second shot was closer. Otto saw the two of them bolt.
    'Fletch! Let's go!' Otto yelled. And he ran. As he ran, one white wing emerged from his back. He flew.
    'got it.' said fletch and jumped after Otto. He manifested a black wing and flew after Otto.

    Sophie looked back.
    'so we broke through this line thanks to you, epic, but what now?'
    Epic looked back, and gulped.
    'I don't know, but we'd probably have to lose our tail' said epic.
    Sophie looked back.
    'oh crap, those are the two strongest people in this world.' Sophie said.
    'those are the two that killed that guy, when they came over to your house looking for me.'
    'dammit.' Sophie said.'okay lets do this........'
    2 minutes later:
    'got it.' said epic. He looked back. They were catching up fast. And then the fireball hit epic in the back.......
     
  6. Was it me. I want to be in
     
  7. :O I was hit by fire?! It shouldn't do anything!
     
  8. It didn't, but a fireball still hurts when it's thrown at your back
     
  9. ... stupid spine
     
  10. 'Sophie keep going!' epic yelled A's he stopped. 'I'm changing the plan a little bit.'
    'well, you certainly aren't A's weak A's I suspected' said Fletch A's he landed in front of epic, Otto right behind him.
    'we don't care about that girl running away, but we do need you.' Otto said 'but don't worry, we wont kill you, we just need an army in order to overthrow the king. He will certainly bring his royal army from the third dimension in about a week. So that's how long we have to train u. But don't worry, you're not alone. There are tons that were never supposed to see this dimension. We captured them and executed their copies.'
    'should I care about your rant?' asked epic 'cuz I really don't care.' he jumped, fire surrounding him. He swung his fist at Otto. Otto just grabbed the fist and threw epic down. Darkness surrounded epic and he blacked out.
    'now he can't complain.' smiled Otto.

    King Apoc looked at Ben.
    'so u have to continue to spy on them. Do whatever it takes to prove them guilty. In three days the Royal Guard will be here, and I want a reason for pointless murder.'
    'sir yes sir!' Ben said and walked off. Apoc listened in on bens thoughts.
    'so I was right he is a traitor. I'll kill them all later. Cyber, use that skill of yours to track them.' Apoc said.
    'yes sir.' said cyber, and went off on his skateboard.
    'now...... Royal Guard! Come!' a hole opened up and 50 men came through. 'now is the start of your hell, Otto. Are you ready? That little army of yours won't stop the 50 men that are each about twice A's powerful A's u.'
     
  11. Lol kwl. Though I'm not that weak! 