You never know

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Tomo2407 (01), Mar 7, 2012.

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    3 weeks ago

    The man crept up to the edge if the fence. Something was wrong, the gate was unlocked, almost… welcoming. As he pushed it he heard a crunch of leaves behind him, he instinctivly swiveled round and drew his gun. A rabbit scurried away in fright. "Just a rabbit…" the man muttered. Again there was a scrunch of leaves and the man turned around, he thought he saw something, a flicker of black but then it was gone. He turned back to the gate and stepped forward. The explosion that followed was so powerful that the nearest animal's, which happened to be a mouse, remains were splattered all over the fence. Another man stepped forward. He was wearing black and was holding a small plate of metal, with a button on it, a detonator. What happened next was so quick it was almost as though it hadn't happened at all. The was a deafening roar and a hellicopter rose from the forest, a chinook to be presice, guns firing at the man wearing black. The bullets thudded into him and he was sent flying backwards. The sniper in the building had been placed at the exact right angle. He aimed his gun, and fired at exactly the right time. Just as the chinook's doors opened a bullet embeded itself in the pilots forehead and he slumped forward. Then, a second explosion sounded. One of the hellicopter's roter blades snapped off, hit by a bullet that had wedged itself in between the blades. The chinook wobbled slightly then crashed to the ground and exploded. Then, silence...

    Bump?
     
  2. 1st bump again bro
     
  3. Bump 
     
  4. Why's it only you guys who read it?
     
  5. Any questions about the story plz wall me
     
  6. I have a question 
     
  7. Can I be in it? 
     
  8. Maybe, I'll see. Btw, it might not be that good cuz I'm making it up as I go along
     
  9. … HELLOOOOOOOOO???? ANYONE NOT IN CANDYS BOTHERED TO READ THIS STORY?! 
     
  10. MEH!!!!! I wuv it and I wuv you! 
     
  11. But you're in candys
     
  12. Pft. I still love it 
     
  13. Ill update if someone not in candys wants an update
     
  14. Or i could just update it