Why Me?

Discussion in 'Best Of' started by *kayleeann2327 (01), Jun 28, 2011.

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  1.  I'm an abusive boyfriend?!?!? Thts's not me it's my evil twin with the same name!!!!!
     
  2. Haha yeah I know Wolf. I just needed to fill the role. It'll get better tho:)
     
  3. when r u writing more??
     
  4. I'll write more today as I'm driving to my sister's doctor appointment. I'll update when I get home.
     
  5. This is such a good story you are one of the best keep up the good work 
     
  6. What he said
     
  7. "Kat!" Katie yelled down he stairs, "That's Matt. Could you get the door, please?"

    "Yeah, I got it," Katalina said as she got up from the couch and walked towards the door. She opened it as she said, "What he hell do you want? I was in he middle of watching," she stopped and laughed. Then she realized who was acompaning Matt at the door. "Oh, hi Sean."

    "What is he doing here?" Sean sneered at Matt.

    "He's here for Katie. What do you need Sean?"

    Sean uninvitedly pushed past Katalina and came into the house. Katalina rolled her eyes and let Matt in. He stayed with her to make sure she was okay. "Are you're parents home?" Sean asked while looking around the house.

    "No, they're gone for the weekend. They went to Mexico," Katalina told him.

    "Are they staying here?" Sean asked in a not-so-friendly tone, motioning to Matt.

    "No," Matt told him. "Katie and I are going minigolfing."

    "Maybe you should go find Katie," Katalina said.

    "Okay, but only if you're okay here."

    "She's fine. Go find your princess, Pretty Boy," Sean told him icily.

    Matt muttered under his breath and walked up the stairs. "Katie!"

    "I'm in here!" Katie called from her room.

    Matt walked in and all he could say was "Woah". She looked amazing. Her long, blonde hair fell perfectly on her shoulders. Her makeup looked terrific; making her ocean blue eyes pop and her cheeks rosey. Her shorts showed the ideal amount of perfectly tanned skin. Her pink shirt complimented her skin tone extremely well.

    "Well, how do I look?" she said jokingly, making fun of his gawking.

    "Beautiful," he said smiling. "I swear you get prettier and prettier everytime I see you."

    Katie blushed and smiled. "C'mon, let's go."

    When they got outside, Matt's Audi R8 was sitting in the driveway next to Sean's motorcycle. Matt walked to the passenger's side and opened the door for Katie, stealing a kiss on her cheek, then quickly walked over to his side of the car. While he was getting in, he accidentally bumped his head. Cursing under his breath, he got in his seat behind he wheel. Katie kissed he bump on his forehead and smiled. She slowly made her way down to his lips. She kissed his forehead, then his nose, then nibbled on his ear a little. She then found her way to his lips and kissed them softly. "Better?" she whispered against his lips.

    "Much," he smirked.

    Other than Matt's bump, the night was wonderful. They played a couple of rounds of minigolf. Katie won everytime, but only because Matt let her. They shared kisses the entire time. They did get scolded by the owner of their publically displayed affection. It had bothered the elderly couple behind them. Giggling all the way back to the car, Katie thought how the night had been nothing less than spectacular. Matt opened Katie's door, but made sure to take extra caution while getting in himself.

    "I had a great time tonight, Matt," Katie said outside of her front door as she looked up at him lovingly.

    Suddenly, as Matt leaned in to kiss Katie, they heard Katalina scream. Her scream was immediately followed by Sean's bellowing voice and a sickening crack.
     
  8. Time for sean to get an ass kicking 
     
  9. does my character come in soon??
     
  10. I haven't posted so.. So I'm just stopping by to say hi!
     
  11. Yeah ur character will come in soon:)
     
  12. Lol well thanks for stopping bye Ry! Hello
     
  13. Updatee! You are soooo good!
     
  14. - update , please nowwwww.!!!
     
  15. Oh my god!! I'm in love with charlieand sean i hate youjeez this is an amazing story!!!! (btw this opinions were of the characters not the actual prople, I'm sure your awesome)
     
  16. Dang it, I thought u meant me too 
     
  17. Haha Maybei could be your secret admirer for all you know
     
  18. Lol thanks micky! That's the sort of feel I'm trying to get for the characters:) and for all those asking for an update, there will be one very soon:) sorry I've been busy you guys /: personal issues take up all my writing time lol but there will be an update soon! 
     
  19. YAYYY!!!!! haha it's really good !!!! I'm hooked! Lol
     
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