Who should I choose???

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *madelinnicoledavis (01), Oct 16, 2012.

  1. Lol yep i will warn u though I am probally going to say spoiler alert a lot cause I have so many ideas 
     
  2. " I don't care if I don't like it I still want to know !!!" I practically screamed at the nurse .
    Zevin sighed. I glare at him. What was it that they thought I didn't need to know ??
    The nurse said" one of the magicians were trying to pull you away from were you where to were he or she was but you defended without knowing and lost your powers for a while. I'm afraid you will have to stay here for the time being"
    " NO!!! " I scream and jump up " I'm not going to do this again!!" then I hear a voice in my head saying " stay I will visit you later"
    " who's saying that?!?!?! " I screamed
    " saying what ?" Zevin says and I could hear the panic in his voice.
    " nothing " I mumble but then fall from where I'm weak still.
    " the less power you have the weaker you are you must calm down and be still so you can regain"says the nurse while Zevin Is picking me up.
    I yell " but who keeps saying there coming to see me?!?!?!"
    " me"
    I look around and scream " but who's me?!?!"
    " shhh stop screaming its alright I won't harm you but I still don't know how you blocked me and lost your powers for a while but no matter " I recognized the voice this time . It was Anubis .
    " Anubis how could you! Why would you do that ! I-I -I "
    I stutter and start closing my eyes .
    " NO! " I hear two people yell at once and then it was black again.
    I wake up and look around. Still there . I groan . Why did it have to be like this.
    I screamed just to be screaming and hear some one say " huh" and I look around and notice everyone is still here . I glare at them all.
    " finally " Anubis said " after you going on a rampage I thought you would be to weak to move"
    " why would I be to weak!?!?" I yelled" I'm perfectly fine there's nothing wrong with me except that you messed my powers up!"
    " yes" he agreed " but I didn't know you would resist and I'm sorry . But about the weak thing you shouldn't even be able to talk right now let alone yell your head off"
    I screamed at him" oh yea then why am I ?!?! And I'm not weak I will - I will"
    I stutter as i hear something .
    " what's that " I whisper to scared to move .
    " oh that us just Zevin over there he is still unconscious " says Anubis .
    I scream as loud as ever "WHY IS HE UNCONSCIOUS!!!?!?!?"
    He said " relax he passed out a little after you did scared that you weren't going to wake up and then he was also muttering i need to tell her over and over again" and he shrugged his shoulders .
    How could I possibly relax ?
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    SPOILER ALERT AGAIN
    I hope you loved it cause it's almost at the who should I choose part or it might have already happened
     
  3. I'll update later ppl
     
  4. I don't feel like updating but I will though and if u read this say something or else I will think I won't need to continue 
     
  5. Bump!!!! Don't discontinue it!!!!
     
  6. Lol I won't there's probally going be a second one I already have ideas in my head I might update later if I feel like it shy ppl come out
     
  7. The nurse walks in and says" good your up ! Your powers should be restored by tomorrow . But I don't know about his" and points at Zevin .
    Wait wait wait. Did she just say powers are gone. How? He was just worried how in the world could that make him loose his powers?
    I ask the nurse " how did he loose his powers?"
    " someone over there" she points at Anubis " tried to bring him somewhere else like he did with you"
    I glare at Anubis . How could he ? It was bad enough he drained my powers but now zevins to ! I thought he was one of zevins old friends? He wouldn't turn on us. Would he?
    I start yelling " how could you! You drained me but now him and you shouldn't even be here you should be at your station you worthless piece of trash . You are a little two headed slobber face weasel eating ....."
    I was interrupted by Anubis holding out his hand in a stop kindve way and he said" enough with the names I did this for a reason"
    " you did it for a reason!" I yelled at the top of my lungs " and what reason was that ? Was it that you didn't want us to be able to fight back or something ? How could you..." at that moment I burst into tears and I couldn't help it . I felt so lonely and hopeless .
    Then I heard someone groan and I look over and see Zevin coming to.
    I rush over to him and start saying" are you ok ? Why did he do this to both of us?" and things of the sort until finally I fell down and just stared at the ceiling .
    " you need some help" Anubis said smirking .
    " not from you ." I snap back at him .
    " to late " he said and came over and picked me up and put me back down and said " now Zevin do you want me to tell her or you?"
    " tell me what!?!? " I yell still mad from what happened earlier.
    " zevins little secret of course " smirks Anubis .
    Then Zevin said" you can tell her I'm a little weak right now but if you say anything that I think should be different i will say something "
    " got it " Anubis replies back.
    " of course your weak you know this crazy thing in the corner over there did this to you!!!!" I yell .
    " yes I do I told him to do it to me but I didn't know he would do it to you as well" he said glaring at Anubis .
    I was in complete shock. Why would he tell him to drain our poweres????
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     why did he want their power drained ?why did he do it to them both ? Why does Anubis always their when it comes to trouble ? U dk do uwell I do
     
  8. Ppl guess at these questions I post afterwards sown times I like to hear your answers 
     
  9. Ment sometimes 
     
  10. ::p Don't Space in quotations, " like this "
    Sentence:
    "Victoria, come here please," called mother.
    ^Just an Example
     
  11. I will update later but I'm also starting another story so look for it to ppl
     
  12. I was shocked" w-w-w-why would you do that " I stuttered.

    Zevin shakes his head " you don't understand I had to so I couldn't fight back "

    "couldn't fight back what" I said

    " In due time but for now I will have to tell you about the other magic you must know " Anubis said.
    I started crying . How could they just put this on me ? Why would they do this I trusted them and this is what I get for trusting people.

    I screamed as loud as possible "why do you do this to me I am not one to give up and if I have to I'll L-l-l-leave!"and cry even more .

    Zevin comes up and hugs me and holds on to me . I let him because I didn't feel like fighting back.

    After a while he says" I'll tell you everything but I don't want to but I will " and he hangs his head down like he was sad but I couldn't see why.
    I look up and said "ok thanks but don't leave anything out no matter what it is"

    He nods his head slowly and Anubis says"now that that's settled let me tell you what you need to know. First Zevin is cursed second we need to hurry and get out if here before apophosis gets out and finally I have the other magic"

    I just nodded my head still to confused but kept listening.

    He said" I can take over people's body like when they die but like they stay alive. There is also a place called the duat it is were you go when you die if you are an element or a magician"

    I just gaped at them. How could you take over a dead body but it not be dead afterwards ??

    " now about the curse he was burn with it and will die in a month or two" Anubis said " but don't worry we have a plan." he added

    I looked at them both and tried to fling myself at Anubis but instead he rushed over and picked me up and put me back like he knew what I was doing.

    I started crying again I mean who wouldn't ? After you've been told the guy you love us going to die and then you find out a whole new kindve magic?

    I couldn't take it anymore I screamed as loud as possible. Then I rolled over and fell asleep dreaming of Zevin dieing and screaming everytime I woke up .

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    what's going happen to Zevin what is the duat what does he mean can get in his body when he's dead but can be alive?? you Anwser me or else I can't update cause I luv wen ppl Anwser these 
     
  13. Spelling and capitalization, again.
     
  14. He'll just be getting his body over and over each time he dies in that body, I suppose.
     
  15. Thanks again lol i was in a hurry last night and I tried the space between the paragraphs like I've seen some do . Do y'all think it looks good or not?
     
  16. Ya it looks better
     
  17. I woke up and got up and walked off while the others were still asleep.

    I walked and walked afraid to use my powers until I got to the waterfall. I cautiously flew up knowing that I may burn out but went up still.

    When I got up I walked farther then before into the woods . I saw a cave and I checked it and walked in and summoned a table and chairs and food and ate.

    I sat there for awhile thinking about what will happen until finally I heard someone yelling my name.

    I stayed were I was and was quiet as possible. Then everything went quiet and I sighed and layed my head on the table.

    "I knew you would be here" says a voice. I scream and turn around to see Zevin .

    "How did you know I've never been this far" I say raising my eyebrows.

    "I used to come here when I had something to think about but I don't have to anymore all of my problems have went away" he said .

    "Well my problems just started" I said sarcastically .

    "What do you mean by that?" he says.

    "I mean your about to die for duats sake!" I yell at him.

    "Yes but I have a plan and I might not die before the fight against apothasis " he said calmly. How could he be calm when he was about to die?? I was about to freak out and he acts like its nothing !

    "How can you be so calm about it" I say almost in tears.

    "Calm about what?" he said .

    "About you dying!!!!!" I scream at him.

    "Like I said u have a plan to were I may not die ." he said calmly again.

    I was frustrated . How could he be so calm about him dying? I don't know what his plan is but if it doesn't work I will probally die within a couple of days from sadness.

    I layed my head down and started crying.

    "It's ok I'll be fine" he says and comes and hugs me . I keep crying though knowing it probally won't be fine ad he says it will be.

    Finally I stopped crying and looked up at him and said"But what if it doesn't work and you do die?"

    "Don't think that way" he said and kissed me. I was still worried though even though I didn't know what his plan was I knew I probally wasn't going to like it.

    I finally said "What now ? Where do we go ? What do we do ? How do we find this guy and defeat him?"

    "I don't know exactly but I will and also Anubis wanted to talk to you he will pull you out in a minute but this time try not to fight him"he laughs"He will put you back here" he said .

    Before I knew what was happening I was pulled out and some where I didn't recognize.

    I saw him and he smiled.

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     what's going happen with Anubis ??? And also read my new story words changed my life and tell me if you like it and I might start walling you if you read this and comment I will wall you when I update tell me if u thank I should