Who should I choose???

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *madelinnicoledavis (01), Oct 16, 2012.

  1. There an advanced race of time Lords :0
     
  2. We where back at the place and we fly farther this time . Then we where at a city an then at the country an then this amazing mansion.
    I was so confused and wondering why I was there and then I see we are on the ground again. He says " come on they will have to prepare you for the ceremony "
    " what ceremony" I say.
    " it's what they do to announce important things like you becoming a leader "he says.
    I say" oh well then can you tell me what I'm becoming a leader of ??"
    " sorry I can't not until after the ceremony and they have prounounced you leader with me . All they do is put you on this seat that flys and we just ride down through town simple as that's so come on" he says and takes my hand an leads me through the mansion.
    We are tookin to different rooms so that they can prepare us for the ceremony.
    They they put a big puffy dress on me. It was blue and sparkly and had layers on it(I didn't like the dress but they wouldn't let me where my normal t shirt and shorts).
    I walked out into the halls and then they told me that they had to find my powers. They told me to shoot fireworks in the air by lifting my arm up and then use my other hand to make the spell my name in the same way. It took me three try's but I finally got it and it was amazing. I was surprised that I could actually do it.
    As I was practicing my new firework trick I here clapping and I turn around and it's Zevin .
    " wow " he says" I see you have mastered some fire elements "
    I say" I guess so huh. I got it after three try's though but then I was surprised that I could actually so it."
    He says" well I'm glad you did . Oh I hear the bell ringing they are about to start"and he holds out his arm. I take it and we walk arm in arm to the door .
    " are you ready " he says.
    " yea I think I am but do I have to wear a dress everyday" I say
    He laughs " not everyday but you do look amazing in it"
    I say " thanks that helps me with the fear I have of then not accepting me."
    " trust me they will" he says and smiles .
    I smile back.
    Then the music starts.
     
  3. They open the doors and we walk out and all you could hear was clapping and cheering.i didn't notice all these people on the way in the city.
    I see the chair or really it was a bench it was pulled by flying horses and the carriage itself was gold.we walk towards the carriage and Zevin helps me in and then the whole place goes silent.
    This voice comes out of no where and it says" introducing our second leader madelin" and clapping and cheering goes out and confetti and balloons appear out of no where and the carriage starts to move.
    " why are the horses pulling this flying? I didn't no horses could fly."I say .
    " wow you can see them . No one else but me have been able to see them before. I guess that's why the council was sure you had to be leader they new you had unusual powers just like me and to Anwser your question I don't know . They where just made like that I guess" he says.
    " oh " I say. Then the carriage stopped and the voice said " madelin will now show us a demonstration of great power" and the whole place goes into claps and cheers again.
    " what do I do " I say
    He says " just do the power they taught you earlier"
    I say" ok" and then I stand up and do the fireworks. Everyone gazed in awe apparently surprised I could do this . Then I sat back down .
    The claps and cheers started again.
    Zevin says" you did great" and takes my hand.
    I smile and say" thanks but why where they surprised when I did it??"
    He says" well that trick hasnt been done by any one in centuries I guess they are shocked"
    " oh" I say " where are we going anyway"
    " oh yea I forgot to tell you they are having a dance in your honor we are headed there now. We have to be there before everyone else do we can greet them ."he says.
    I say " a dance wow. I don't no how to dance that well "
    He laughs" you don't have to your magic will do it for you"
    " oh cool " I say
    And then I see where we are going there is a big palace with sighns carved in it.
    " what do those sighns stand for??" I ask Zevin
    He says" they are the different elements like earth plant water fire magic chaos things like that"
    I say" oh well why are they there "
    He says " I can't tell you yet but you'll know soon enough"
    " fine " I say and look at the town wondering If the dance would be as amazing as the rest of the things I could see.
     
  4. Then I see my mother . I thought she was coming tomorrow ?? She sees me and waves and I wave back
    " what is mom here for ? I thought she wasn't coming until tommorow ." I say
    He says" you didn't think she would miss your dance did you"
    I say" I didn't know she knew about this place "
    He laughs " why wouldn't she. She was born here"
    "WHat " I half scream then lower my voice a little
    I say" she never told me this. She never tells me anything" almost crying. All she ever wanted to know about was me and wouldn't talk about her.
    Zevin hugs me saying" shhh it's alright don't cry" and he wipes a tear off of my face. I look up at him as his eyes where sparkling .
    He holds me tighter as I sob . How could this happen to me?? I had a normal life and now it's all gone . This life seemed much better but still how could my mom not tell me about this place.
    I look up at him and say" did she know this would happen?"
    He says" she did " and I sob more" but she didn't tell you to protect you otherwise your powers would have gotten out of control."
    My powers. Since when did I have powers ? I kep crying and I cried until we got to the palace .
    Zevin lifted my head and looked into my eyes and he says" you've got to stop crying. It will be ok everything will be fine and you'll be ok " he smiles and wipes the tears off of my face. I manage a weak little smile back and i see the palace doors now .
    He jumps down and helps me down and says" your dance awaits " and he holds out his arm and I take it. We where walking arm in arm towards the door and I wonder what it would be like inside.
     
  5. I will update later today ppl so beg for an update while I'm gone
     
  6. PLEASSSEEEE UPDATE SOOOOOOON I LIKE THIS STORY AND IM DIYING WITH NOTHING TO READ
     
  7. We walked inside. It was amazing! There where beautiful chandeliers and tables decorated with clear diomands and balloons and streamers.
    There was a stage with a band setting up there equipment. Then on the other side of the room was a balcony . On the balcony was two seats and I thought well I know where we sit.
    There was a huge sighn hanging down from the balcony that said welcome the new leader! It was covered in all colors and had elements sighns on it.
    There was a huge buffet and a lot of workers preparing the food still.
    There was a huge dance floor also with the sighns is the elements on them .as I was thinking about why elements where always there I sensed something dangerous Was about to happen .
    I yell" Zevin duck!!" and duck down and as he gets down we hear a shaking. Then the chandelier fell and it started swing back and forth on the wire that was still attached to it and the ceiling.
    Someone fixed it and we got up.
    " how did you know that was about to happen" Zevin asked .
    " I - I don't know . I just sensed something." I say.
    He says" you sensed the power of chaos it comes around every so often ."
    I say" oh" and start thinking how in the world I knew how to detect chaos when my thoughts were interrupted.
    " come on we better get to our seats" Zevin says .
    " how??" I ask" there's no stairs or elevators"
    He laughs" we fly of course"
    "FLY!! I don't know how to fly!"I say.
    He says " all you have to do is think I need to get to the balcony and you will just fly up there "
    " ok I'll try " I say
    Then I think I need to get to the balcony and I felt my feet lift off the ground and I look down and see Zevin smiling.
    " I did it!" I yell and then start wobbling.
    " stay focused or you'll fall!" he yells back
    I nod my head and try to focus again but I was falling before I could .
    I heard some people screaming and out of them all I hear Zevin screaming " no!"
    That's when I think I wish I had a trampoline under me. Then I see the ground closer and closer and then I hit something but then I am flying back through the air. I look down and see the trampoline .
    I start laughing and when I go back down I jumped so high I did a flip. I was laughing so hard my face was hot .
    Then I thought I still need to fly to the balcony and then i didn't go back down I was flying again and I kep my focus this time.
    Before I knew it I was in the balcony still laughing my head off. I looked down and saw everyone looking in awe wich made me laugh even more .
    Then Zevin flew up to the balcony and started laughing .
    " that was some trick " he says.
    I say " it wasn't a trick as I fell I was thinking about how I wished there was a trampoline under me and there it was "
    " wow . I did that once but instead if a trampoline it was pillows " and we start laughing. He sits in one of the seats and says " I guess it's time for the party to start" and a bell rung in the distance I sit in the other seat and say " i guess so"and everyone piles in.
     
  8. Yay I like ppl to bump do u think it's ok cause I didn't no how ppl would react to the sudden change in events
     
  9. I think it's awesome!
     
  10. Thanks I was hoping it would be good cause I thought it needed something cause it was getting boring
     
  11. While i watch everyone take there seats I see my mom down there and motion for her to come up. She shakes her head and mouths I don't know how. So I tell Zevin I was going to bring my mom up here and he started to protest but I was already flying down .
    I land in front of my mom and she smiles .
    "I see your learning your powers" she says
    I say" yea I am a little at a time but come on I want you to come with us up there" and I hold out my hand and she grabs on and we fly up.
    I say" now stand here " and them stare at them both because I knew they where hiding something .
    I say" tell me what i am "
    Zevin says" sorry but we can't do that not until after the party and we can train you"
    " train me for what!" I say hopelessly confused wondering why they couldn't tell me what I wanted to know.
    Then Zevin says" you better take her back down before they start it will start any minute so hurry" I grab my moms hand and fly her back down and say" I'll see you later" and fly back up.
    The band starts to play a song and everyone rises . I ask Zevin" what do i do?"
    He says" in a while you will have to do a trick to impress them. I suggest doing the flying thing like you are doing a routine then falling in the middle of it and land on the trampoline like earlier . Also make a ring of fire in the air to jump through and a vine to swing on in mid air then disappear and reappear on the ground. Now that would blow them away.
    I say" ok simple enough " like it was nothing .
    Then the band plays another song and they sit . Then a loud voice says "introducing our new leader madelin " and Zevin says" do that trick now "
    I did the trick and everyone seemed to be amazed expecially when I disappeared and I laughed the whole time and then the dance begun .
    I flew back up to the balcony and Zevin says " come on and we will go dance"
    I say" but how I don't know how to dance "
    He says" all you do is close your eyes and say dance I must dance good in your head and you will be fine." and holds out his hand . I take it and we fly down to the floor.
    He says" now just think dance I must dance good and close your eyes and when you think you mastered this power you can open them."
    " ok " I say and think dance I must dance good and close my eyes . I could feel myself dancing but I couldn't feel the ground under my feet . I finally was brave enough to open my eyes and realized we where dancing around the room but in the air!
    I also saw my mom dancing with someone. I smiled. I knew she was happy .
    Then the music ended and we flew back up to the balcony as everyone gathered around the buffet table.
    I ask" what do we do now?"
    He says " they will eat and then vote to accept you or not. If they say yes we will have a feast tomorrow and if they say no then we will have to do something amazing to get them to say yes but I don't think that will happen.
    Then everyone is done eating and ready to vote . Buzzers that say yes and no on buttons are passed around .i hope they accept me.
     
  12. All I could see and hear was people hitting buttons on there buzzers.
    Then the voice said " madelin has been accepted as a leader " and cheers broke out .
    I screamed and hugged Zevin .
    " congratulations " he says" I guess we will have a feast tomorrow and we will go back to the palace to get ready to train you"
    " ok " I say " but can I ask my mom something before we go"
    " of course" he says and I fly down to my mom.
    " congrats " she says
    I say" no need to congratulate me I came here to see who you were dancing with earlier" and she looks at me like I'm crazy.
    " what do you mean " she asks
    I say " mom you can't hide it I saw you "
    She says" fine it was a guy that I used to know when I lived here"
    " oh ok that explains it" I say
    " explains what" she says
    I say " nothing but I have to go train by" and go find Zevin and we are carried back to the palace.
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    Sorry about the short update my fingers are hurting though and I will update tommorow and Y DOES NO 1 READ THIS AND COMMENT do come on our you stalker ppl on here who just read and don't reply
     
  13. Yay I got a bump  I will update in a couple hours probally
     
  14. Once we got back I imagined my normal clothes instead of this awful dress and I had on clothes I actually liked .
    Then I went outside to look around. There wasn't much there except for some dead plants. I thought wow these need some life and then the whole place started growing and the plants where beautiful and there were trees everywhere.
    There was a fountain and a bird bath but they didn't have water so I thought they need water and then there was water in the bird bath and water flowing from the fountain .
    Then I hear something in the leaves and I think I need to hide and go and run and duck down in the tall grass. I look up and see a weird looking creature.
    The creature was red and blue and had the air element sighn on its belly and it was flying .
    I don't know how it flew because it had no wings. It was flying though. I looked like it was trying to find something or someone .
    Then I thought me it's trying to find me. I put my head back down and could sense the chaos that it was causing . I still didn't know how I knew this but I always seemed to know.
    Then i looked back up to see if it was gone and it wasn't . I was so mad that it was trying to find me I sent fire towards it
     
  15. And it collapsed to the ground wow i say to myself and then hear the clapping I turn and see its Zevin .
    He says" that was your first test hopefully you will be able to pass the next ones but for now I will teach you about what you are and about the elements"
    I say " ok" and start to wonder what I am.
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    Sorry about the cutoff and the short update
     
  16. I'mTrying to find a good part to put the who should I choose part in and If u thought it already happened well it didn't 
     
  17. Then I look around and see everything go back like it was ugly and dead.
    " why did it go back " I say
    He says " well one your still invisible and two this place has an ancient curse on it that makes it this way."
    " oh I didn't know I was invisible" I say and turn back to normal.
    " that was a training exercise and you did great on it . I hope you pass the next one when it happens " he says
    " yea me to" I say
    He says " well I guess you are wanting me to tell you what you are now "
    " YES! " I practically scream
    He says " well come on we will have to get away from here to some where quiet "
    I say" ok" and follow him and them start flying because my legs were hurting from walking so long. Then I see the waterfall from were I first came here .
    We fly to the top of it and up there there's a table with food all on it.
    We sit down and he says"well you are an element but a very unusual element. Usually people are just one element for example your mom is an earth element a d can control most of what is on the earth but you are more than one element in fact you are all of them "
    I say" what are the elements and what am I called?"
    He says " fire , water , earth , plant , magic , chaos , life , death and you are a ultimate element but there are two kinds . I am a limited ultimate because I can only certain powers at certain times "
    I say" So I'm an unlimited ultimate "
    " yes but usually people who are limited ultimate and unlimited ultimate don't get along and if they do then one of then has to have the ninth element wich is surprise "He says
    I say" and that's what we came here for to test me for it isn't it"
    He says " no we came here to test all of your elements so it's ok but I have to test for the surprise element to because ive never thought about it until now"
    " ok " I say and he shows me how to do all the different elements but then if cane down to the surprise element and I was nervous really nervous. What if I did have this but couldn't figure out how to control it?? Then I thought well what if you do control it.
    Well I say to myself there's only one way to find out.
    Then I was told to think surprise and when i did the weirdest thing happened.
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    What happenedI know but I think I will wait for a while to update before I tell y'all and who would of known she was going to be an element but not just any old element 