Update Macy's Pov: I walked out of second period stuffing my stuff into my purse. Ugh I hate school and I hate everything right now! I slammed into someone and fell to the floor everything falling. I tried to get up and was helped by a stunning brown eyed boy. "God my apologizes I'm so clumsy pardon me," he helped me up to my feet. I stated back at his features gasping he was beautiful. "Umm... No um it's fine I should've... Been watching... Where I was going," I gathered my stuff. His British accent made my stomach flip. "I'm Ben by the way," he stuck his hand out. "I'm um Macy," I smiled taking his hand. I was drawn in by his charming features, I couldn't stop smiling. I was positive I looked like an idiot. "Could you maybe help me? I'm a bit lost see I'm a transfer student and I have no idea how to get to my next class. It's Civics with Mrs. Maryann." "Oh that's my next class I'll walk you to it! Come on," I took his hand and lead him into the court yard. I blushed as I realized I was holding his hand, but he didn't seem to mind. ******************************************************* Alex's Pov: I sighed standing in the court yard pretending that I was okay when I wasn't. I looked around expecting Ann and Beth to come and bother me, but they didn't. I looked around and saw her with.... Who was that? I watched carefully they were holding hands?! My heart shattered I left my friends and walked to class a little early. I walked in and took my seat plastering a fake smile on my face. Time to pretend I care when I really don't, I sighed and listened to the lecture. Ben sounds super hot but Alex is completely heartbroken
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Update Ben's Pov: I walked with Macy stunned that a girl this gorgeous would talk to me. She was absolutely beautiful inside and out. Her eyes were a chocolate brown that you could just stare at for hours. Her warm skin made me melt inside, I've never felt this way about anyone. "So here's the classroom," her warm voice snapped me out of my thoughts. "There's Mrs. Maryann over there," she Pointed to the short lady by the laptop. I smiled at Macy "thanks I appreciate your help love," I walked over to the teacher as Macy took her seat. The teacher smiled "hello you must be Ben?" "Yes ma'am," I nodded my head. "Well welcome to the school or the country rather," she laughed. I smiled "may I sit near that beautiful girl over there?" I pointed to Macy and she looked at me smiling. Mrs. Maryann laughed "that's a distraction you can seat in this empty seat," she pointed to a seat three down from Macy. "That'll do thank you ma'am," I went to take my seat. Looking over at Macy every five seconds she was such a beautiful distraction. I wanted to be near her all the time and just have one kiss just one and I'd be satisfied. I chuckled I would probably beg for more she was just stunning. •••••••••••••••••••••••••• Macy's Pov: I sighed as class ended and grabbed my things jumping out of my chair. "Hey Macy where can I find the Spanish room?" Ben smiled at me. I dig in my bag and find a map. "Here this should help you," I smiled. "Oh thanks can I walk you to class?" He took my hand not waiting for an answer. I giggled "how will you did your way back?" "I'll figure it out," we walked out into the court yard smiling at each other. Then I saw him, Alex. we made eye contact and I could see the hurt in his eyes. "Um you should go now just turn the corner and there's your class," I smiled at Ben and let up of his hand walking to my next class not looking back. "Macy wait!" I sighed as Alex caught up with me. "What?" I tried not to cry. "I wanna talk to you," he took my hand an lead me to a corner in the courtyard. "What's going on? You've been avoiding me... Is it that new guy?" His jaw locked. I could see the jealously and I tried not to smile. "No it's nothing we just aren't meant to be Alex you should just move on," I kept my eyes on the floor holding back the tears. "Look at me and tell me you don't wanna be with me and I'll need bother you again," he watched me. "I...I can't," I sighed. "Exactly," he lifted my head kissing my cheek "I'm not gonna give up till your mine," he left me holding my cheek stunned. Whoa there's some real love right there who's gonna win her over? Will you ever find out what the truth is? The rumor? Will Beth and Ann return? U find out just keep reading