When Will You Notice Me?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -PA_Veronica-, Nov 6, 2012.

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    Alex's Pov:

    I sighed as I ran at baseball practice. She was still on my mind. I shook my head, I gotta focus. I ran another two miles and hit the showers.

    I dried myself off with a towel and put my clothes on.

    "Aye Alex!" Chris walked over giving me a fist bump.

    "What up man?" I smiled.

    "Nothing much. Aye what's up with you and that chick Macy? Everybody's talking about it."

    "She's not a chick man she's a girl. She is so amazing I think I'm in love man," I laughed.

    Chris laughed harder "your killing me! You? In love? What? Your Alex bruh you can get any girl you wanted and you go for her?"

    "Come on she's the one I want and I can barely get her," I smiled. "She's different. She makes me feel alive," I shook my head smiling hard.

    "Damn man you fell hard didn't you? Well hey I saw Ann and Beth talking to her after school she looked pretty fucked up after they left," Chris shook his head.

    "Wait what?" I ran my hand through my hair "what were they saying?"

    "I don't know man, ill catch you later!" He walked out.

    I sighed grabbing my stuff and walked to my car getting in. I wonder how Macy is doing....
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    Awe snap shit getting serious
     
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    Alex Pov:

    I turned off my alarm and got up stretching.

    "Oh god help me I have a feeling this day so gonna suck!" I got into the shower and washed myself off. What did they say to Macy? Why was she so upset? I released as I took in the steam.

    "ALEX! GET OUT OF THE BATHROOM YOU IDIOT
    !" My little brother banged on the door.

    "Alright! Chill man!" I got out dries myself threw on my clothes and headed out to school.
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    I walked up the steps and into the hallways looking for Macy. I searched everywhere for her and couldn't find, I sighed as the warning bell rang singling only one minute left to get to class. I headed for first persons slowly walking to my seat. Where was she?
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    Macy's Pov:

    I ducked into class extra early avoiding Alex I knew I wouldn't be able to avoid him long, but I had to keep my distance. He could never know who I used to be he wouldn't understand. I sighed and did my work holding back the tears, if he knew he would hate me.
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    WHAT IS THIS SECRET?!
     
  3. Drugs alcohol or sex r my guesses or murder
     
  4. BUMP!!!!!! 0.0 a nerd... half my guesses are the same as kitty's.... or a foster kid 0.0 a juvenile deliquent O.O or someone that was like Ann and Beth -.- i hate thise girls stupid females
     
  5. BUMP!!!!
     
  6. Bump! Let's beat up Ann and Beth
     
  7.  violence is not the answer... And my thoughts on the ending are Macy and Alex overcome the issue of whatever the problem with Beth and Ann is and live happily ever after the end. AND 50 BUCKS FOR HONOR SOCIETY? Nooooo, it's more like 20-25 dollars...
     
  8. Nice story V glad I read it 
     
  9. BEAT UP ANN AND BETH!! <_< sleazy sleazy girls!!!!!
     
  10. Lol Ashlee I know it's 20 dollars I just felt like making it more I'm in National Honors society so I know. And good guess:p well see
     
  11. It was only 20 for you? I feel robbed mine was 25
     
  12. Take that back it was 5 bucks for a shirt so it was 20  I feel a little better
     
  13. Lol
     
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    Macy's Pov:

    I dreaded going to second period, I dragged my feet walking slowly. I got to class and sat down in my seat looking around, I never really paid any attention to the class. I looked around and look at the grey tables scattered all around the room disorganized. I studied the three idiots sitting in the front goofing off.

    "Macy? You okay?" Virginia studied me.

    "Yea I'm fine I'm just freaking out about my 3 tests that I gotta take today," I put my head down.

    "So you and Alex together now?" She smiled widely.

    I looked at her "uh no I'm not really into him like that," I watched Alex walk in and take his seat.

    "Macy...." Alex said softly.

    I pretended not to hear putting in my headphones and putting my head on the desk. I didn't bother playing any music I just say there silently crying. The tears rolled down my face and onto the desk.
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    Alex's Pov:

    What did Beth and Ann say?! I was furious I wanted answers and I knew I wasn't gonna get them from Macy, I looked at her. She had she head in her arms probably asleep, I sighed.

    "Hey Virginia is Macy okay?" I asked Virginia.

    "She's fine she's just worried about her tests that she has today," Virginia smiled and turned back around.

    I put my head down. That can't be true if she was worried about her tests she would've been studying or laughing about how's she's gonna fail. I smiled she's so funny and adorable. A tear fell down my cheek, am I losing her already? She isn't even mine and I feel like I'm losing her.
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    Awe Alex is such a sweetie
     
  15. AWWWWW!!!!! BUMP