When Will You Notice Me?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -PA_Veronica-, Nov 6, 2012.

  1. >_< ugh! a few seconds late!
     
  2. Update plz!
     
  3. Update!!! Loving it
     
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    Alex's Pov:
    I walked to second period not bothering to go to the court yard. I just need more time with her. I walked in to see she wasnt there my heart tore, I sat down. I watched the door waiting for her to walk in, after endless seconds she finally walked in. I let out a deep breathe not realizing I was holding it in.

    She sat down with Virginia laughing.

    "Yea I know she was so bitchy!" Macy giggled.

    "Girl what she say?" Virginia laughed.

    "She was like get out of my way loser, and I'm just like kk slut," Macy smiled.

    "Bahhahahahahha"

    "Shhhh" I smiled at Macy "be quiet you guys are too loud gosh."

    Macy looked at me "then close your ears."

    "Okay," I put my hands over my ears.

    She giggled "your such a dork," she looked at Virginia.

    "Mmmm girl you know that's not what you think!" Virginia giggled. Macy glared at her and I just smiled awkwardly.

    What were they talking about?
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  5. Bump!!!!!!
     
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    Macy's Pov:
    My face got hot. Oh god Virginia please be quiet I don't want him to know. Hell think of me as a dorky girl who has a creepy crush on him. Thankfully Virginia heard my silent pleads.

    "So um Alex how bout that geometry project? Did u finish," I let out a sigh of relief as Virginia had a conversation with Alex. I turned to my worksheet quietly working.

    "Macy what do you think about this project," I got caught off guard and quickly whipped around my hair getting in my face.

    I giggled "damn hair!" I fixed my hair. "I thought it was okay honestly it wasnt too bad at least till I see my grade," I smiled.

    "Haha can't wait to see that!" He took his phone out and focused on it so I turned back around.

    "Macy what do you think bout that dance coming up?" Virginia smirked like she had an idea.

    Oh god! "Ummm idk I think it's pretty stupid a girl asking a guy to a dance pretty stupid," I tapped my foot feeling awkward.

    "I don't think it's stupid. I think it's a great idea to see what girls have the nerve to ask out the boy they wanna go with," Alex smiled.

    "Who are you going with Alex?" Virginia asked.

    "Well I've been asked by Ann but I don't wanna go with her there's someone else I'm dying to go with. I'm just waiting for her to ask, well if she would even think of going with a guy like me!"

    "Your crazy any girl would be lucky to go with you!" I bit my tongue. Did I just say that? My face went bright red and I looked at the floor. I gotta cover it up with something. "You know since it would be better than nothing ur as close as most girls can get," I giggled.

    "Haha very funny," he looked annoyed.

    "What? You mad bro?"

    "Anyways who are you going with?" He raises his eyebrow.

    "Ummm I'm not going I'm going out that weekend. Out shopping and hanging with my family." I smirked.

    "Oh well I have baseball camp that weekend anyways,"

    "Oh really? Why didn't you say that before?" I was now staring him down.

    "Cuz I was hoping that maybe you would ask!" He stopped and got real quiet.

    "Um...uh... I need to go to the bathroom," I stood up and tried to make my way out of the room.
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    FINALLY! Maybe now she'll understand his feelings for her
     
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    Macy's Pov:
    My face got hot. Oh god Virginia please be quiet I don't want him to know. Hell think of me as a dorky girl who has a creepy crush on him. Thankfully Virginia heard my silent pleads.

    "So um Alex how bout that geometry project? Did u finish," I let out a sigh of relief as Virginia had a conversation with Alex. I turned to my worksheet quietly working.

    "Macy what do you think about this project," I got caught off guard and quickly whipped around my hair getting in my face.

    I giggled "damn hair!" I fixed my hair. "I thought it was okay honestly it wasnt too bad at least till I see my grade," I smiled.

    "Haha can't wait to see that!" He took his phone out and focused on it so I turned back around.

    "Macy what do you think bout that dance coming up?" Virginia smirked like she had an idea.

    Oh god! "Ummm idk I think it's pretty stupid a girl asking a guy to a dance pretty stupid," I tapped my foot feeling awkward.

    "I don't think it's stupid. I think it's a great idea to see what girls have the nerve to ask out the boy they wanna go with," Alex smiled.

    "Who are you going with Alex?" Virginia asked.

    "Well I've been asked by Ann but I don't wanna go with her there's someone else I'm dying to go with. I'm just waiting for her to ask, well if she would even think of going with a guy like me!"

    "Your crazy any girl would be lucky to go with you!" I bit my tongue. Did I just say that? My face went bright red and I looked at the floor. I gotta cover it up with something. "You know since it would be better than nothing ur as close as most girls can get," I giggled.

    "Haha very funny," he looked annoyed.

    "What? You mad bro?"

    "Anyways who are you going with?" He raises his eyebrow.

    "Ummm I'm not going I'm going out that weekend. Out shopping and hanging with my family." I smirked.

    "Oh well I have baseball camp that weekend anyways,"

    "Oh really? Why didn't you say that before?" I was now staring him down.

    "Cuz I was hoping that maybe you would ask!" He stopped and got real quiet.

    "Um...uh... I need to go to the bathroom," I stood up and tried to make my way out of the room.
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    FINALLY! Maybe now she'll understand his feelings for her
     
  8. AHHHH!!!! BUMP!!!!!
     
  9. Bump!!!! Update!!!!!!
     
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    Alex's Pov:

    I avoided everyone's gaze and looked at my Fone pretending to concentrate. God what have I done Macy won't ever talk to me. I put my head down staring at my feet. She hates me now.

    "Alex..... Do you have feelings for her?" I looked up at Virginia not sure how to answer.

    "Um what?" I decided to play it dumb.

    "Enough acting Alex cut the crap you like Macy and you were hoping she would ask you to the dance. You knew if she asked you, then you wouldn't go to baseball camp."

    "Um I'm gonna go to the bathroom," I got up and walked out. "God I need some air!"

    "Alex get back in class," I looked at Macy. She was smirking and she looked gorgeous.

    I laughed "or what?"

    "I'll make you miss baseball camp and go to the dance!"she crossed her arms over his chest giggling.

    "Can't make me go to the dance with you," I leaned against the wall smiling.

    "I didn't mean with me I meant with Ann!" I laughed walking into the classroom and taking her seat.

    Oh go Macy you are beautiful and funny as ever. I smiled I love you Macy.
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  11. Y o u
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    Spell like a human being who's gone through the sixth grade, at the very least. If English isn't your first language, then you shouldn't very well be writing in it.
     
  12. Hey Qinny.... If yur going to be rude about the writers grammer i suggest yu dont comment.... People make mistakes... -.-" gosh people like yu irritate