When Will You Notice Me?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -PA_Veronica-, Nov 6, 2012.

  1. WHOOP WHOOP! FIRST ON PAGE 5
     
  2. Bump!!!!!!
     
  3. Update
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    Alex's Pov:

    It's been weeks since the incident in the court yard and Macy won't even look at me! I felt torn and broken, I pitched the baseball across my yard practicing. Why was she so mad? Did she think I was an ass who flirts with every girl? Honestly I don't even talk to girls as much as I talk to her!

    "Alex! Time for dinner!" My mom yelled.

    "Okay I'm coming," I put my ball up and head inside.
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    Macy's Pov:

    I wiped my tears away scolding myself. I should've known not to fall for him he was a total player. I threw my head onto my pillow sobbing, why me? I'm such an idiot to think a guy like him would like a guy like me.

    I got up washed my face and changed into my pjs. I laid down and fell asleep, drifting off into a deep sleep.
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    Can't stand sluts they're ruining everything!
     
  4. *girl like mesorry typo
     
  5. Aww poor Macy and Alexbump I love it! Good job
     
  6. Bump I like it
     
  7. Really good may
     
  8. wat madie i didnt write this... her name is v im may 
     
  9. The high school cliches are coming back, aren't they? :(
     
  10. Hats wrong with that?
     
  11. Bump!!!! Update!!!!!
     
  12. They're high school cliches, what's right with them?
     
  13. Well school is back and summers over this is now in season
     
  14. What she said and plus... its alway interesting with highschool drama
     
  15. There is no in season with literature, only cliches and non-cliches... And it's the same story every time... What is interesting about that?
     
  16. -.- if yu dont like the highschool clichés then why blther commenting on them if yu never read them
     
  17. Because I still have hope for humanity, and well-written literature.
     
  18. Update:
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    Alex's Pov:

    I slipped on a white collared shirt and black gym shorts. The days seemed endless! Macy still wasn't talking to me no matter what I tried. It's official she hates me. I sighed grabbing a protein bar and jumping into my Lexus I drove to school.

    When I finally got there I got out to see Macy walking with Kyle. He had his arm wrapped around her and she was pushing him away. I got closer to see what was going on.

    "Come on sexy. I know you want me." He grabbed her ass.

    "KYLE!" She grabbed his wrist and twisted it. "Leave me alone!" She flipped him onto the floor and caught my eye.

    "Macy are you-" before I could finish she walked away ignoring me. I sighed and gave Kyle a kick "don't mess with her unless you wanna hear from me and the whole baseball team," I ran after Macy. I grabbed her arm softly pulling her close to me. "Hey look I just wanna know if your okay..."

    She looked at the floor "I'm fine go away you don't have to pretend you care."

    I grabbed her chin making her look at me. My heart was beating faster and I licked my lips. "Macy I-" just then the bell rang and Macy got away.

    "I gotta go to class cya," she turned and walked off.

    I sighed and banged my head on the locker. Why didn't I just say it?! Why does my tongue get tied when I'm around her? I shook my head walking to first period Fuck my life.
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    OMG ALEX WAS SOOOOO CLOSE! Ugh stupid bell