When Will You Notice Me?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -PA_Veronica-, Nov 6, 2012.

  1. Update
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    Ben's Pov:

    I walked to her after second period watching her walk swiftly. She was amazing in everyday possible! I sighed as she stood in front of me waving.

    "Hey Ben!"

    I smiled "hey beautiful," I gave her a hug.

    "Haha right I look like shit!" She frowned.

    How could she think that? She was the most gorgeous girl I've ever seen she made my heart melt with that dazzling smile.

    "I've been dying to ask you something," I paused. "Macy will-" I was cut off by a dude.

    "Hey Macy!" He walked up and gave her a tight hug.

    I felt my blood boil, he needed to get away from her.

    She smiled "Hey Alex!"

    I glared at him "hey dude hop off I'm trying to have a conversation,"

    "Oh my bad man I'm Alex by the way," he stuck out his hand.

    I took his squeezing his hand rather hard. "I got that I'm Ben,"

    "Um Ben you can let go of his hand....." Macy looked at me confused.

    How could she not figure out that I didn't like him touching her. It was on he was gonna pay nobody touches Macy! She was mine and only mine.
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    Ohhhhh
     
  2. Ohhhh snap! I love this, bump ^-^
     
  3. Omg please please please please BUMP!!
     
  4. BUMP!!!!! >_> BEN NEEDS TO HOP OFF! TEAM ALEX FTW!!!
     
  5. Update
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    Max's Pov:

    I glared at him as he let go of my hand. He wanted her as much as I did, but she was mine.

    "So Macy you know that party that's coming up?" I smiled at her sensing Ben shake with anger
     
  6. Oops ignore that
     
  7. Update
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    Alex's Pov:

    I glared at him as he let go of my hand. He wanted her as much as I did, but she was mine.

    "So Macy you know that party that's coming up?" I smiled at her feeling Ben shake with anger.

    "Oh yea that one at Beth's house?" She held no expression.

    "Yea.... Well I was wondering if you were going?" I smiled at her.

    "Oh yea I wasn't invited," she laughed.

    "Oh well maybe you-" I was cut off by the warning bell.

    "I'll catch you later," Macy took Ben by his hand and walked to class.

    I sighed "damn it Alex smooth," I walked to class. "This is gonna be war!"
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  8. Why did I put max>.< sorry I was busy while writing this lol fail it's cuz the both end in' X'
     
  9. First on 26 now to read the update  jk
     
  10. I think it's time to updateeeee
     
  11. Ben's Pov:

    "So Macy that party Alex was taking about I was wondering if maybe you would like to go..... With me?" I smiled at her looking hopeful.

    "Awe Ben that's sweet, but I have plans that night. Rein check?" She smiled her dazzling smile that just made you wanna stare at it for hours.

    "Yea... Sure..." I let go of her hand and walked to me seat upset. Screw love! Who even cares, oh right I do. I sighed watching her from a distance Alex was gonna have to back off she was mine!
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    Macy's Pov:

    Ben was so sweet, but I had to start training for soccer. I sighed I really liked him, but I loved Alex. I sighed if only Beth and Ann would let me be with him. I played with my thumbs, but after he found out about what I used to be he would never look at me the same again. I looked over at Ben and caught him looking I smiled and he just looked away.

    What was I gonna do? I couldn't go through this stringing along two guys I had to pick! Ben was sweet, charming, and totally cute. Alex was understanding, loving, caring, amazing, and made my heart wanna leap out if my chest.

    I longed to be with Alex, but I knew it would never work Ben was a better fit. I made my decision.

    The bell rang and I caught up with Ben. "Hey Ben I canceled my plans and I would love to go to the party with you," I smiled at him.
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  12. BUMP! SHE CANT GO WITH BEN