*Shorty2012 (01)
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I made 2 poems and I like never make any unless it's an assignment. I did these cause of the emotions I was feeling, so what do you think of them?
The other one...
Alone
I go through the woods
I see the trees surrounding me
I feel alone but I'm not
I don't know why but there's something else
Something with me
There's nothing just trees and animals
Then I see something
I run over to it as it goes faster away
Soon I'm almost to it but it disappears
Frowning I walk back to the place I was once before
Then I see it again
'WAIT!!' I yell
It looks back and stops
I run over to it
We walk to the woods together no longer alone.
The other one...
Alone
I go through the woods
I see the trees surrounding me
I feel alone but I'm not
I don't know why but there's something else
Something with me
There's nothing just trees and animals
Then I see something
I run over to it as it goes faster away
Soon I'm almost to it but it disappears
Frowning I walk back to the place I was once before
Then I see it again
'WAIT!!' I yell
It looks back and stops
I run over to it
We walk to the woods together no longer alone.