Fume, why don't you just shut up and leave Zach alone -_- no one asked you whether you support the story or not. if you don't have anything positive to say then don't say anything at all.
Part Two I stood outside the gothic church, waiting for my cue. I looked up at the worn down cross atop the building. It was on an angle; probably would fall over if an earthquake hit. "Wonderful way to kill someone," I said to myself. I always noticed things like that cross. By that, I mean things that could kill someone. Like just now, I imagined the earthquake hitting, then the cross would slowly topple forward, gaining speed as it went, hit the angled roof, and slide the rest of the way down towards some unfortunate soul below who thought he would be safe from the earthquake in the church. Unbeknownst to him, he was actually going to be crushed by the uncared for cross, and everyone around him would hear the crunch of every bone in his body being pulverized into powder, and his blood would seep out around the cross like some sacrificial ritual. But this was unlikely to happen, as earthquakes weren't common in this area. After this thought, I couldn't hear anything inside other than quiet talking. "Now's probably the best time to go in." I walked up to the giant entrance and calmly entered, taking a seat at the backon the left side. I didn't bother listening to the pastor, as I was not here for the wedding itself. I brought my hand up to my belt and felt the dagger that sat snuggly pressed to my hip. "Soon..." I thought to myself. As the ceremony passed on, i felt the urge to use the dagger many times. "Not yet..." I would think to myself. But now came the words I was waiting for: "Do you take her to be your lawfully wedded wife?" In a swift motion, I took the dagger out of my belt, stood up, and threw the dagger across the room...
I will no longer be writing this story.... I will be asking RyaRayne to continue for me... It will still be my story though... I will tell her what I want to happen... She'll just choose how they get there...
Sorry for not updating yet. I have been a bit preoccupied. I will have a new update as soon as possible.