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Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *_Whateva_ (01), Sep 17, 2012.

  1. I will because I'm bored

    Rough draft
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    I don't see anything good looking about me I'm just a ugly girl. All the guys crush on a ugly girl why? I don't know I'm not them I'm me.

    I'm Alexa York Daughter of Cierra York.

    My mom looks amazing and I'm a ugly girl.

    People say i'm popular but popular kids aren't gloomy.

    The Teacher doesn't seem to think that either and it's last period do when the bell rings he asks me to stay for a bit.
     
  2. Don't stop writing, I love ur story and I only read two chapters. Make them longer and I'll tell ppl to read your stories!!
     
  3. They are awesome!!!
     
  4. Earlier update!

    Rough draft chapter 3 (I'm calling the book tough draft)
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    He asked me if I wanted to have sex with him "No that's just Weird!" I start walking away when he does something.......unpredicted

    End of chapter 3 part 1! I wanna leave u in suspense
     
  5. Bu bu bu bu bu... GENIUS!!
     
  6. Want me to do part 2?
     
  7. Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  8. Rough draft chapter 3 part 3
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    I don't know what happened but I had something pinch my arm then I turned around and said"yes" I'm thinking what did I just do? Then I run to him and cling on to him another what the heck am I doing?

    We're at his house and I'm doing whatever he wants screaming in my thoughts. I'm do scared when we're undress but I see something totally unexpected.......

    End of part 2 MORE SUSPENSE!!!!
     
  9. Omg! This turned out very different then what I expercted
     
  10. I know I just think of new stuff (follow me to get a hint on wat's going to happen)
     
  11. FOLLOW U!! Lol
     
  12. Remember to proofread to correct spelling, grammar, capitalization and punctuation mistakes
     
  13. I lied about the hint ppl! It was true until my social studies class sorry
     
  14. Rough draft chapter 3 part 3
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    There was a blinding light and his place was the most beautiful girl in the world oh I forgot to mention I'm bi so I like girls to!

    I felt the control brake but I still did whatever because she was so beautiful I couldn't resist.

    She said"u are so beautiful why do u think your ugly? I know your amazing!"

    I blush and say"I'm a nerd inside and nerds are always ugly"
     
  15. No one likes it?
     
  16. Remember your punctuation, and spell out words like you instead of u. Use TONS of detail =)
     
  17. New story I'll continue rough draft later

    From yellow to black
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    This isn't one ordinary story it's different. FLASHBACK!

    It was last summer I was eating my ice cream minding my own business when this guy came up. He looked ok but when he slapped my Ice cream out of my hands . He lifted me up and stuffed me in his van.

    I was yelling and screaming and crying but I knew know one would hear me. When the van stopped he pulled a bag over my head and pushed me into the doorway.

    He took me into the basement then took off the bag.He had black spray paint with him and he sprayed it all over my blond hair he said"I hate you (conserned) Blond chicks so I'll turn them all to black haired mwhahahaha"
     
  18. New story dropping From yellow to black