Under The Covers

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Royale30, Apr 8, 2012.

  1. Ending! Ending! Ending! Please? 
     
  2. Days, eh? 
     
  3. Lol! I'm planning on writing today so I'll finish this before I start my new OneShot. :)
     
  4. Yay! 
     
  5. It's been 10 days. I have climbed Mt. Everest. Where the fuck is it.
     
  6. Yes! exactly what I was thinking^

    -Nightmare
     
  7. ... OH FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!! I come back to PIMD after a VERY long break and FINALLY find a story that is actually captivating and awesome, then, BAM... Ya shut it down.... why.... WHY!!! You're tearing me apart Lisa!* *quote from some funny movie. The name of which escapes me. 

    Cependant, I do wish the two of you all the best for your future endevours in fanfic and look forward to reading more of your stories. Peace

    Emmanuel
     
  8. lalalala...
    bump.
     
  9. Bump!

    -Nightmare
     
  10. Under The Covers: Conclusion

    Teddy's POV

    Over the past 20 years life seemed to fly by and everything fell into place as I transitioned from a teenager to a working, responsible adult. I graduated from high school with well enough grades to be accepted into a decent college and to land a job that allows my family and I to live comfortably in a nice suburban home.

    My family? My family consists of my two children, Anna and Mark, as well as my lovely wife. Anna is 5 years old. She closely resembles me in hair color. She's polite but incredibly shy. She's also a real bookworm. Mark is 7 years old. He plays soccer. He's a real comedian, and I can tell he'll be a mirror of me when I was in high school.

    After the car accident years ago when I hit Angel, my eyes opened and I saw what was truly important; true love, not the kind derived from sex appeal. So when both Angel and Ashley fought for my heart, it only made sense to pick the one that meant more to me. My wife is an amazing woman. She's grown up very much since back in the days we were dating. Instead of being carefree, she is always busy improving her family's lives. Whether it be cooking dinner, cleaning the house, or waking the kids up for school, she always does it with a smile on her face and hardly any complaints. She retained her beauty; beautiful eyes, a white-teethed smile, and a figure that has the other neighborhood mothers in awe.

    Despite everything that has happened, I know I've made the right choice in who I chose to spend the rest of my life with, I think I know what it feels like to be truly happy.

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    /end troll post

    So yes, this conclusion did suck. It was short. And it didn't tell you very much. To be honest Qin and I gradually began to dislike this idea until the point we didn't want to finish it. This conclusion was basically just to say the story is finished and move on.

    Be on the lookout for more stories by Happiness_Sadness (Qin) or I!
     
  11. Wait who the hell did he choose lol
     
  12. I think Angel.…?
     
  13. Since she's his sister, she means more to him… I think…
     
  14. Qinster...
     
  15. That's the thing, you don't know who he picked. That's the trolling part of it lol. The main question of who he goes with is never answered.