Under The Covers

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Royale30, Apr 8, 2012.

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    Bad! Bad Angel! Go back to Teddy! 
     
  2. BuMp BuMp BuMp

    bUmP bUmP bUmP


    It's so beautifully descriptive that it burns my eyes out. Criticism cannot be given, this is pureness in its brightest form. ,_,

    It's amazingly awesomely epic. ._.

    Words cannot describe how magnificent this is. ,_,

    INCESTUOUS LOVE FTW.
     
  3. Impossible to criticize.
     
  4. No critisicm!:D
     
  5. :') Qin's amazing work lol. I changed a bit that update but I'm really appreciative of her. I've been in a creative stupor, and therefore, have hardly wrote anything.
     
  6. Bump bump bump
     
  7. Bad Royale. ._.

    if you just stopped ignoring us... :L
     
  8. I don't ignore anyone Dx
     
  9. Dx update alreadyyy Dx its too awesome that i dont wanna waittt
     
  10. The comedic stylings to Royale. A little bit of amusement while we work on the update. Enjoy.
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    Comic Relief;

    Teddy's POV

    Click

    All the doors of my car locked simultaneously. I had to be quick, no one could see. I struggled to slide my retainers down.

    "Oh Kim Kardashian! Your body is enough to make me drool! I wish I could meet you in a dark alley at night!" If only my phone was bigger! I wish I had a bigger screen! I wish something else was bigger too... But that won't happen either. It's funny what goes on in my head when I'm alone.

    I slide my finger across my screen to reveal another photo. "Oh, that beautiful sapphire blue dress fits perfectly on those curves!" Heavier breaths. Heavier breaths.

    I needed this. This tension was just too much. Not having Angel is killing me. I mean she's no Kim Kardashian but she's got a nice ass. Maybe I could convince her to get plastic surgery! She may not be the real thing but I'd settle for that. The thought excited me.

    Thud

    Was that a car door? Ugh, I don't even care. Feels.... So... Good! My head tilted back as the cookie crumbed, and there couldn't possibly have been a better time for my mom to knock on my car window.
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    RoyQin
    Yes. This came from Roy. Not me this time .
     
  11. Wow lol caught me off guard 

    bump
     
  12. Oh god. Lmao!
     
  13. Wow..lol 
     
  14. Oooooohhhh! Awesome!! :p bump
     
  15. Oh my gosh. awesome