Truth to the Lies

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *Miss_Charlie (01), Sep 19, 2011.

  1. Love the story, especially since there are mythological creatures!
     
  2. I walked into my room, hoping to avoid the sunny attitude Kayla had whenever she had seen the angels. She was sitting in the middle of the room waiting for me.
    "Isn't it such a terrific day?"
    I shrugged.
    "Well I think it is, being with people who are so at peace makes you feel so happy, wouldn't you agree?"
    Again I shrugged.
    "Well if you don't mind I'm going to try and change my hair, don't wait up!"
    And with that she skipped of to her bathroom. I sighed and looked down at DeathBite, who to my horror was covered in ribbons. I knelt down to untangle him.
    "It's okay, she'll be fine in a day or two."
    As soon as I was finished DeathBite headed to her cat cave to regain her pride. I walked into my bathroom, the bathtub was already full. I lay down and felt the water sooth me. For some reason it terrified me that I had killed Rita twice. Was that on purpose? Did somebody want me to target the Valei family? As these thoughts went through my mind I looked at my legs, oh yeah I had a tail. I drained the water and watched as my tail turned back to legs. As soon as I had left the bathroom I went to sleep.
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    updates l8r
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  3. Hey this story is AWESOME!!!! UPDATE FOR ME PLEAZE!!!!
     
  4. It's amazing  please continue
     
  5. updating after my hw is done, give me an hour or two
     
  6. sry I didn't get around to it, I promise I'll update as much as I can tomorrow!!!
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  7. Yay good luck on the updates
     
  8. The next morning was slightly better. Kayla had lost the chipper attitude after she tried to morph her hair blonde, needless to say she looks like a bumblebee. I looked at my schedule, swimming all day. That means Dara all day. I groaned and got dressed. And thank goodness Kayla didn't say a word.

    I walked into the classroom, well it's not really a classroom. Just a huge room with a 100 foot deep lake. Not many kids have this class. Just me (mermaid), Faxli (sea monster), Liv (Octo-lady), and Dara the siren. With Faxli as her slave girl she was probably the worst girl in our unit. Being a siren she was beautiful, with long blonde hair and big brown eyes, but she was also a harpie, so she can sprout hawk wings and be a real *****. We all walked in and let our water form take us. While Dara and I only grew tails, Faxli and Liv went through something that looked pretty painful. From the waist down Liv sprouted tentacles that went out in every direction. Faxli's entire body stretched out until she had a 20 foot long body and the hugest neck in the world. The next hour was spent doing tricks and such, flips, twirls, you name it. By the end we were all exhausted, but we weren't finished yet. While Dara and I could just launch out of the water Liv and Faxli needed help. First Dara and I had to grab Liv, while not getting any water on ourselves, and pull her out. Then the three of us had to attach ropes to Faxli's fins and pull with all our might. So swimming is probably the worst class ever.
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    bad...update........no...inspiration!

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  9. Yeah, blonde's not a good color for me, lol. Great story
     
  10. Yay!!!! And it wasn't to bad
     
  11. really? I thought it sucked
     
  12. No it's not bad it intro-ed more characters that can move the plot along I'm already gettin ideas on what could happen next
     
  13. I agree... It wasn't bad! I'm kind of excited today 
     
  14. sry I haven't updated, family stuff