True Love (Tween Love)

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *__UncoloredCrayons__ (01), Jul 30, 2011.

  1. Yay, finally, the kiss scene
     
  2. I like people named Colleen. I don't know maybe it's cuz they're like me.
     
  3. When do tge popular kids come in
     
  4. The popular kids come in the next post but not right now
     
  5. ••••••
    Saul's POV

    After our date in the park I drove her to school. We came just in time before the bell rings. Kayla wanted to meet up with her friends so I followed.

    "Hey guys" she shouted.

    "Hi!" they all said

    "This is Saul" she said while she puts her hand on my shoulder

    "Hey Saul"

    "Hey Colleen"

    "Hi I'm Matt"

    "I'm Kay"

    "I'm Tyler"

    "Hi Kay, Tyler, and Matt"

    We all introduced our self and got to know each other. I guess we're all friends now, maybe.

    After classes Kayla, Kay, Colleen, Matt, Tyler, and me sat together at lunch.

    See, Colleen and Matt are dating, Kay and Tyler are dating, but I don't know if Kayla and me are dating.

    "Hey Kayla"

    "Mhmm"

    "Uhm, do you want to, maby go out?"

    Everything got silent for a moment.

    "Uhm, sure!"

    "I'll pick you up at 9"

    "Hey guys!" Colleen interrupted.

    "I'm throwing a party tonight and Kayla can be your date Saul"

    "Cool, how 'bout it Kayla?"

    "Sure"

    LATER THAT DAY

    It's tim for the party and I'm going to pick up Kayla.When I got to her house I saw the popular girls TP-ing someone's house. One of them waved at me and blew a kiss. I just hope Kayla didn't see that. As I approached he at her door step she kissed my cheek.

    "Hey Kayla"

    "Hey"

    "So, let's go"

    "Kk"

    I drove to the party, as I drove the front tire hit something and i heard a weird noise from my motorcycle.

    "Saul, whats wrong"

    "Oh nothing"

    I was wrong, as I speed up I began to lose control. I tried to control it but I couldn't. I pulled up but It was too late

    Kayla was screaming.

    "Ahhhh"

    "Hold on Kayla"

    It's was too late. We crashed into a tree.
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  6. Just to let you all know im planning to make a series of True Love. Each one is about different couples like Kayla and Saul, Colleen and Matt, Kay and Tyler
     
  7. uhh...i seriously hope those girls werent TPing my house...EXTRA PUSHUPS FOR THEN?
     
  8. •••••••
    Kayla's POV

    I opened my eyes. We were at the hospital. I heard Colleens voice

    "OMG, Kayla's awake"

    I saw everyone surrounding me, except Saul.

    "Where's Saul?!"

    "Sorry Kayla" said Tyler

    "He's not awake yet" Kay continued

    I could feel the tears coming. Then, I started to sob.

    "It's ok Kayla" said Matt, "I would be crying too if it were me and Colleen"

    "I know"

    "Well if you want we can leave you alone to rest"

    "No thanks, I like you here"

    After two days we spent in the hospital, we were fine and ready. When I got home I wasn't allowed to go out with Saul anymore because of the accident.

    The next day I was ready for school, but Saul wasn't, he crashed first and hit the tree with his head. I feel so bad for him.
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    Sorry this one was short. I ran out of imagination 
     
  9. Y U NO PUT COACH IN YET?
     
  10. There's alot of people who signed up so 2morrow kk
     
  11.  I run lapz now.