trinket box

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by lindsey1414, May 1, 2012.

  1. I'm reading it DO NOT have a heat attack…because then you can't update
     
  2. I LOVE it. I'll try to keep this on the first page ;3
     
  3. Yay! I am just finishing up my next update, I'll post it within the next two hours
     
  4. Amanda's POV
    I locked up my box, and put it back in it's place. I covered it with some t-shirts, and I closed up my closet. I grabbed a jacket, and ran downstairs. I told my mom I was going to hang out with friends, and got on my bike. It felt good to have the wind gushing in my face. It cleared my head, of all the recent events. I looked up Charlie's address on my phone, and I found his house. I knocked on his door, and he opened it, looking surprised to see me.
    "We have to talk," I said.
    "What," he stammered, at a loss for words.
    "Now," I demanded.
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    what can I do to make this story better? Comment below!
     
  5. Ok! Idk if i can do that, cuz I tried once and it didn't work when I posted it, but I can always try again!
     
  6. Awesome, keep up the work : D
     
  7. Hey sorry I can't update today...going to mother's day party. Please continue to bump so this stays on the first page! I'll make sure tomorrow's update will be extra long 
     
  8. Sorry!!! I didn't get to update yesterday either!!!!
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    Charlie's POV
    I was just finishing up my homework, when I heard the chiming of the doorbell. I trudged through the hallway, and to the door. Whoever it was, was impatient, because they rang the doorbell three more times before I got to the door. I opened the door, and saw a familiar face. It was Amanda. She looked serious, so I let her in.
    "We need to talk," she said sternly.
    "What?" I asked dumbfound.
    "Now," she demanded.
    I was shocked, and surprised, but mainly I was just confused.
    "How could you know?" I whispered.
    She heard me. I immediately regretted saying that.
    "Know what?" she questioned.
    She sure liked prying.
     
  9. Cliff hanger!!!! I tried to make paragraphs... Did it work? 