Torn

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xX-Elle-Xx (01), Dec 6, 2011.

  1. Me!!!!!!!! Make it long
     
  2. *Saturday Night*
    I had just gothome from a lovely date with Alec. I was upstairs laying in my bed when I heard a knock on my window. I opened the window hoping it was Alec, but saw Ryan, standing on my balcony.

    I looked upon him, and busted into tears. He pulled up my chin in his fingers and went to kiss me. My lips brushed his barely before I pulled away, which killed him. The pain showed in his eyes.

    " I love you . Know that before you kick me out. I always have, I just never knew it. But when I saw you with him, something snapped . It hurt me so bad. Kim, you know I loved her, we dated for years. I gave into her.. I'm sorry. I need you.. You'll always be my Jenna. I'll never be me without you. Goodbye. ." I watched him walk out onto the balcony, and begin to jump down.. I saw a sparkle in his eye, but I soon realized, they were tears....

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    Who's excited? Who's confused? What happens next?
     
  3. What a cliffhanger so far very well done
     
  4. Me!! I'm excited..and confused..but more excited!!!
     
  5. I did the Ryan thing for all my Ryan fans!! Your support decides the end
     
  6. Your support for your favorite character decides the end!!!  Nessa and James, I'm working with Fatal Attraction now!!
     
  7. I feel odd reading this cause my name is Ryan cobalt and my first girlfriends name was Jenna

    If your wondering why I always go by James it's my screen name
     
  8. I'm a Ryan fan!:) 
     
  9. Omg this is awesome! Bump! 
     
  10. NUUUU CLIFFHANGER.
     
  11. Pwease bump!
     
  12. I couldn't sleep that night, knowing tge truth about Ryan... He killed me inside, then he says all that?

    I rolled over in my bed and finally fell into a deep sleep. I dreamt of Ryan and I being together and being in love. I woke up early, planning another walk through the town.

    I walked into my bathroom and put on my makeup, forgetting about the whole stalker thing... Until I looked into the mirror and saw written in blood "Better watch your back B*tch. I'm coming for you soon." Horrified, I ran to my moms room, who wasn't home... I was screaming and crying wondering who the he'll it was taunting me..

    I ran and opened my front door, only to find my cat, Cutip, dead and covered in blood laying at my door step.

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    Someone is angry with Jenna... Can you guess why? Or who?
     
  13. I think IRS alc
     
  14. I think it's... Jena's alter-ego. She does all this stuff to herself and doesn't even know it
     
  15. I think it was.....Hm.
    I think it was herself. She probably did it without knowing,