Torn

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xX-Elle-Xx (01), Dec 6, 2011.

  1. Aww I love you guys ! I'll finish asap!
     
  2. Plz finnish I'm so addicted to the story
     
  3. Love it finish soon
     
  4. I heard Ryan screaming after me, but I couldn't stop. I turned around once and looked him dead in the eyes, hoping he would see my pain. I screamed at him , "I HATE YOU!!!! " As I got in my car and flew out of the driveway and sped away.

    I couldn't think. I just drove, and when I snapped back into reality I was at the local cafe, sitting in the car crying.

    I felt betrayed and cheated. My heart felt like it was being stabbed thousands of times. I whispered to myself, "Why don't you kill me now? I hate this!!!! I hate me!!!" I screamed to my stalker, hoping he would come and save me, by taking my life away....
     
  5. Love it!
    Bump!
     
  6. Ill try to post in world chat whenever I update. Check frequently!!!  im so glad yall like it!!!! Also I update alot so please check in alot
     
  7. Ohhhhhh I hope there is more
     
  8. About to update "The Perfect Two" again:) check it if you haven't yet.

    Btw BUMP!!!!!!!!!
     
  9. I heard a knock on my window, and I looked up to see a fraile old man looking at me.
    "Miss? Are you alright? You're parked in front of my car, so could you please back up a bit?"

    "Oh I'm so sorry." I backed up and let the old man through. His gentle smile gave me a bit of hope...

    I drove back up to tge main road and turned on the radio. "Hate me," by Blue October came on, and I began to cry worse. My phone rang, and it was Ryan. I never wanted to see him again. I hung up and threw my phone into the floor. He called again and again. I couldn't take it. I pulled into a small convince store parking lot and almost turned off my phone, but I had a text from Alec.
    "Hey, I haven't seen you in a while. Lemme pick you up... I noticed you left school early."

    I texted him back and said "Ill see you soon, where can we meet?" I let out a smile, and started my engine.
     
  10. We met at the Rhine City Park, where he asked for the full truth of everything that happened. I told him about Ryans kiss and me walking in on him and Kim.... Just everything that he wanted to know, I told him.

    We walked for hours, hand in hand and talking. Nightfall came and suddenly I was home, Alec beside me at my door, telling me goodnight. I looked at him and told him Thanks for everything... But he kissed me, wrapped his arms around my waist and almost lifted me off the ground. My arms were around his neck, indulging in him.

    He left me at my door, after meeting my mom, and drove off on his motorcycle.

    I went to sleep thinking of him endlessly.
     
  11. Aww... Bump!! 