Torn

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xX-Elle-Xx (01), Dec 6, 2011.

  1. 

    "B-Bryan??" I whimpered. I fell powerless to him. The fear in my heart could have killed me...

    "Hey little b-tch." He laughed. " Miss me?" He kissed me hard and long, as he moved his hands all over me. I was frozen, almost paralyzed.

    I looked down to Jacob, his head was bleeding and he was still. I cried weakly, begging God to save him. My tears spilled down my cheeks in desperate sobs.

    Then, I was smacked so hard that i fell to the ground. "He'll be dead soon. I'll make you watch if you continue to act like such a f-cking idiot." He kicked me hard in the stomach leaving me breathless.

    I tried to scream but no sound came out. Bryan picked me up and carried me closer to his car.

    "STOP!!! NO!!!!" I kicked and screamed, as he threw me into an old truck, tied me down, blindfolded me and closed the door. I heard a rustle outside and some yelling. I screamed in panic.

    A gunshot went off outside.... Oh God, No...

    

     Five bumps to update....
     
  2. ... Bump... 
     
  3. Thts five an I didn't even count..Continue!!!p
     
  4. Bump bump bump!!!
     
  5. BUMP
     
  6. :0 MOAR!! Bump
     
  7. BumpUpdate please
     
  8. 

    I heard the car door open and slam shut.. The engine revved and I was thrown to the floor as tge truck disappeared from the crime scene.

    I knew I would be help captive and most likely tortured physically and sexually. My eyes stung with tears as I remembered my last seconds with Jacob. His last moments here, alive....

    "Is it a secret that I love you too?" My stomach tightened. I remembered his smile, his voice... His arms wrapped around me, telling me he would save me from this hell.... God why? Why didnt i leave sooner? Why did he have to die? Why couldn't I have died instead of him?Take me please, I desprately begged in my mind.

    My brain kept showing flashbacks of him... His lively personality, gorgeous features and the beautiful person he was, all gone.

    I saw his body laying there, his head bleeding and his body limp. My Jacob was gone....

    Forever....

    
     
  9. Dear fans, there are two updates today!!!! Before you read this one read the one before it!!