Torn

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by *xX-Elle-Xx (01), Dec 6, 2011.

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    I ran from him in tears and got over to my car in the parking garage. I dropped my bags beside my door, and cried.

    "Why..." I whispered as I slammed my fist onto the hood. "You bast-rd." I screamed. I got into my car and sat down in the seat. I cried as I started the engine.

    I suddenly felt a hand firmly grasp my shoulder. I screamed in terror.

    "What!?!?" The voice yelled. I slowly turned to see Jacob standing there, his eyes red and his breath heavy.
    "I can't let you do this Jenna.. Whatever it is, we will fight it. Come here.." He opened his arms to me and I ran to him.

    "So you love me, Jenna?" He smiled and kissed my forehead.

    "Shhh. It's a secret.." I smiled slightly.

    "Is it a secret that I love you too?" He smiled.

    "Yes, Jacob." I put a finger over my lips. He took my hand and pulled it away from my lips, and kissed me. He ran his hand down my back and held me tighter. I slid my arms around his neck and indulged in the most amazing love I'd ever had.

    I opened my eyes as I looked down the dark parking garage. A dark figure was clenching his fists only twent feet away, standing beside a car...

    Was that Alecs leather jacket? I could have sworn it was..

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    Five comments on my story to update!!
     
  2. Bump!
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    5 different comments 
     
  3. Ohmygoodness!' bump!
     
  4. Wait that's 5 hah u must update!
     
  5. tht means bump.whenever I say that,it's bump
     
  6. @Justin :roll: Is it that hard to type bump?! 
     
  7. AH MOAR!!>:0 I knew it was Alec-.-
     
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    The man began walking towards us, then running. "JACOB RUN!!!!!" I screamed franticly. Just as Jacob turned, the man hit him over the head with a gun.

    I screamed in shock and horror as his body fell to the floor. "Jacob!!!"I yelled.

    "Get the f- ck off him Jenna. I'll kill him." He growled as he pointed his gun directly to Jacob.

    Unsure, I stepped away from Jacob. The man pulled me close, smelling my hair as he pulled it. He ran his fingers across my back as his lips contacted my neck. I whirled around and slapped him, but he only threw me to the ground and began feeling my body. He had me pinned down as I screamed for him to release me.

    "I really thought you'd remember me Jenna.." He mocked as his hands moved to my breast. I spat on him, which was the best I could do.

    "You little b-tch!! I'll have you when I want you!!!!" He yelled as he slapped me.


    Suddenly realization poured into my mind. Those eight words echoed in my mind, as my face went white.

    The man smiled as he realized I finally remembered him....

    Bryan...

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  9.  BUMMPPP
     
  10. Bump bump bump bump=4 bumps
     
  11. Bump 
     
  12. Well I knew it was 1 of those 2...CHA-BUMP!!!