These Scars are my story, so why are they all about you?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by X_Livi-is-dead_X, Nov 20, 2011.

  1. BUMP!!!!!!!
     
  2. 
     
  3. --2 Long Months Later--
    (Danny is all healed. Probably impossible for that kind of wound so fast BUT IT'S MY STORY! NOT YOURS!)

    I looked at the long scar on my stomach. I had the knife with me. I rubbed the knife against my wrist not cutting it. Mercedes walked by me and laughed at my scar. She's like the devil's spawn! I get one piece of food a day. I have to hunt the food and my only weapon is this knife. There is more of my blood on the knife than the animals. I looked at the scars on my wrist that had happened in the past 2 months. How did I become this? I use to be happy. Now my bestfriend is a knife. I walked out of the house and decided to go hunting.

    I walked to a place deer play a lot. I grabbed the bow I made with out Mercedes knowing. I went up in a tree and waiting. Right when the sun was going down some deer came out. I let them get a semi-close distance and shot the arrow right threw the buck's neck. I've messed up and it surived once. I ran over to it and sliced its throat. I smiled at my kill. I cut the good meat off and left the body for the wolves. I Also took an antler. Did you know you can sharpen a knife on that? Neither did I until i lived out here. I started a fire and cooked the deer meat. I ate 2, if Mercedes finds out she'll stab me... Again.

    I brought the meat to Mercedes after it wasn't burning. She nodded and gave me one piece and ate the rest. Since we lived here she has had a weight change, and not getting lighter. I don't mean to be mean but she eats almost a whole deer by herself! I went to my small bed and layed down. I put the knife under my pillow for protection. It was about 9 but i go lay in my safe spot early. I dont go to sleep until I'm positive Mercedes is asleep. I layed there in fear. "When did my life become a living hell?" I asked myself.


    did you all think Lily gave Danny the scars? Well you were wrong. Sick twist huh? Mwahaha! WHY MORCIDI WHY!?! well I hope you like this update. The story will be coming to an end in like 10 chapters...  Savior it.
     
  4. I'm getting fat in this story?! 
     
  5. WHAT..........WHY?.........UODATE VERY SOON!!!!!!!....
     
  6. xD I'm doing my math HW. I'll update later
     
  7. ok but I'll hold you to that
     
  8. Danny POV

    I woke up before Mercedes and did my morning chores.

    THE END
     
  9. Haha SIKE!

    Danny's POV

    I woke up before Mercedes and did my chores. I did the days work and finished around 2:00. MERCEDES WAS STILL ASLEEP! I went to the lake and bathed then braided my hair. I layed down and took a small nap.


    (I CAN'T THINK!!!)
     
  10. It's still great no matter how short
     
  11. Danny is asleep. I can't write for her!
     
  12. 
    A story in emoji.
    Danny's awake now.
     
  13. I wish. My Writting Danny Is fast asleep. I can't write at 6:00 am.
     
  14. Nope. woke her up long ago.(loud karaoke singing)
     
  15. it's fine we understand that you don't know what to write!!!!!!!......please update soon......