Your used improper grammarYou get a grammar Ticket -Grammar Police
You used improper grammar! You get a Grammar Ticket Pay for it with another update Or else I will make you pay
You used improper grammar You get a Grammar Ticket Pay for it with another update Or you will pay
you used improper grammar! you get a grammar ticket!! pay for it with another update or I'll make you pay!! not sure if it'll turn out right, but is that what you wanted to do
Danny's POV I bit the persons hand and kicked them. I ran over to the body on the ground and put my foot to their throat. "Who are you?" I said demanding. "Damnit Danny, get off of me!" they replied. It was Mercedes. "Mercedes!!!" I said hugging her. "Yeah yeah." she said. "Follow me!" she said. I was confused but I did. We reached an abandoned tennis court. It was in great shape. There was a small house next to it. "Okay, what now?" I said. "We live here silly!" Mercedes said. "What! No!" I said and started to walk towards the road. A knife hit the tree next to me. "YOU ARE STAYING!" Mercedes said. I saw a small light behind me. I grabbed the knife and ran. "Mercedes, hide!" I told her. I went in the house. It wasn't abandoned to long ago. There were the guys that kidnapped Mercedes. He shined the flash light into the house. I sat down, in the position I was in the knife stabbed me. A tear fell from my eye. Mercedes quickly grabbed the knife out my stomach (Not the organ but under your chest, that area) Blood was everywhere. I saw the guys leave and I ran right towards the bathroom. They have to have a medicine closet! I washed the blood off of my shirt and used Neosporn then I wrapped some taws around my body. I layed on my stomach giving it pressure, to help stop the bleeding. "Are you gonna stay?" Mercedes asked. I had no choice with this wound. "Yes." i said.