These Scars are my story, so why are they all about you?

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by X_Livi-is-dead_X, Nov 20, 2011.

  1. bump!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  2. I'm guessing you want an update?
     
  3. UPDATE!!!! 
     
  4. Bump bumpity buuuump
     
  5. Mercedes POV (before Danny got note)
    I walked away from Danny. Its his number! I walked outside and I heard someone behind me. "Uh Hello?" I said. I didn't hear a response but I heard movement. "COME OUT!" I screamed. No one responded. "Okay be a wimp" I said and turned around. A guy was right there. Before I could react he put a white cloth over my nose. I started to get dizzy and soon fell limp. Last thing I saw was me getting tied up.
    --Who knows much later--
    I woke up tied in a chair. I obviously was in a building not a van anymore. "Ew would it kill you to buy some febreeze?" I said. It stank more than the gym locker room. I heard a laugh and my head shot that direction.

    "UNTIE ME SO WE CAN FIGHT!" I yelled. "there wouldn't be much of a fight." a male voice said. "Untie me so we can find out." I said. "Ha!" a girl said. I saw two shadows wall out. I hopped towards the door. Then turned myself around and hooked the rope on the locked door. I pulled up and the rope snapper. "Love you Jethro Leroy Gibbs!" I said to no one. I untied my feet and saw a boarded up window.

    I walked over to it and tried to rip off the boards. "Get off you stupid thing!" I yelled. The board came off, 1 down, 2 more until I can fit threw. By the 2nd board my fingers were bleeding. I looked down. We were on the first floor. I jumped down and ran away from the building. I don't know where I am or where I'm going. Just away from that place.
     
  6. bump.....still love this story
     
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  8. Danny's POV

    I went to the place, I was 5 minutes early. I watched as a car pulled up right at our meeting spot. 1 minute until it happens. The clock turned and a guy came out of the van. "Are you Danielle?" the man said in a husky voice. "Give me Mercedes or I'll kick your ass!" I hissed. He took that as a yes. "She escaped." he said. "SHE ESCAPED! WHAT KIND OF FOOL DO YOU THINK I AM? DRIVE ME TO THE PLACE AND GIVE ME HER!" I said in a loud whisper. He put his hand over my mouth and dragged me into the van. I made sure I knew the way home, ready every street name. I saw some eyes that flicked off the headlights, I quickly jumped out of the car. They stopped and I ran towards the eyes. "Mercedes!" I yelled. I turned my back to the woods and I was pulled into the woods.
     
  9. Julie your gonna kill us all 
     
  10. That would be a sick twist, Mercedes killing them all
     
  11. please update soon