"LIL? LILITH?" Sara shouted in the direction she ran off to. "Oh shut up Sara, shes gone, now turn me for crying out loud" Frigg moaned to Tash. I was sat with Hannah on the side of the roof, away from the others. "What happened then?" she said, curiously. "He bit me, hated my blood, turned me and ran off. Simple as that." i said, closing my eyes and imagining him. "Did he kiss you?" she said laughing. "On the hand" i said, almost in a dream like phase. "Oooooo Casey!" she said in a stupid voice. "What am i going to do about Lilith though?" i sighed. "Well i dunno. Just stay away from her. Follow your heart" she said, doing stupid actions with her hands. "I'll push you off in a min!" i said, joking with her. "How will Tash turn Frigg?" i asked, looking over to see them looking at each other, like they were ready to go. "She will probs do what Frank did to you?" she said. "Ahh yeah" i said. I looked over to see Natasha and Frigg's wrists joined. "What did Frank say when he ran off?" said Hannah changing the convocation back to Frank. "Stay Beautiful, the world is ugly?" i said. "Ahh... He has only ever said that to one other person before, me. He fell for me way back when." she said sighing at the memory. "Being Lilith's friend she said i couldn't, just thinking she liked him or something i backed off, but now we know." "Woah... Wait are you saying he said that because he likes me?" i said, horrified, but REALLY pleased at the thought. "Well i don-" she started, but was interrupted. "GUYS IM A VAMPIRE" said Frigg jumping around. "Shut up" i said, cursing her under my breath.
Its been a week since the 'incident' with Lilith. Shes been very ignorant towards me but what can you expect? I was lying in bed one night, Lilith was asleep, when i saw a spider. I Had nothing better to do so i watched it, it walked around before going under the door. I got out of bed and followed it, I pulled the door too and started looking for the spider. "Come out little spidey" i softly whispered. "Hey Casey" someone said, grabbing my hand. "Get off me Frank" i said trying to push him off me. He stood in front of me and locked his red eyes with mine. "Go away" i said, memorised by his eyes. He smirked and then crashed his lips into mine. I tensed up but then melted into the kiss. He placed his hands on my hips and i sank deeper into his lips. Then i heard someone clear there throat. I pushed Frank off me and looked at my dorm door. Stood there was Lilith, hatred riddled her eyes as she stared at me. "Just, never talk to me again" she said slamming the door behind her. I ran up to it and tried to open it, she had locked it. I knocked and knocked before bursting into tears and sliding down the door, crying into my knees. "Casey?" Frank said, trying to move my hands. "Go away." i said strictly. "But..." "Frank just go away" i said looking at him. "Your eyes have all puffed up, bless" he said cupping my face in his hands. I pushed him away and sent him flying and crashing into the wall opposite. "Casey?" he said standing up and rubbing his shoulder. "Go away, you have caused nothing but trouble." i said. "Fine" he said walking away. I cried into my knees until i stood up and walked off, i looked in every room and found a old room, everything turned gray by dust, and a small bed in the corner. I threw myself on it and cried myself to sleep.
I woke up covered in dust and the pillow was stained with tears, and blood? I sat up and wiped the dust off me before heading back to my dorm. Damn. The door was still locked. I walked to the toilets and had a shower and washed my tear stained face. Lucky me, the dorm was actually open this time so i went and got dressed and put my dorm key in my pocket just in case. My last lesson of the day, history, night had already fallen, but it was soo boring. I also had a craving for blood. I couldn't take it anymore, i grabbed my bag and ran out of the room and headed to the roof. I sat on the roof looking out into the woods, there is loads of things to eat, or even just suck every last drop of blood from their veins. "Hey?" i heard a deep voice say "Hello?" i said back. "Hi!" someone said as they jumped and sat next to me, he had a dark brown afro, and brown eyes. "Im Ray, a wear wolf" he said laughing. "So when you go into wolf form do you still have that epic fro?" i said admiring his hair. "No, i wish i did though!" he laughed. "Awesome, I'm Casey by the way." i said. "Ahh Frank had mentioned you once or twise" he said flatly. "Grim" i said lying down on the roof. "Damn, full moon, i will talk to you some other time Casey, oh and Frank gave me this to give to you" He said while handing me a piece of paper before he jumped of the roof and went into wolf mode. I watched him run off as i slowly opened up the paper.
Very nice and detailed Just love it. I must say, you cause this way of writing to be gory, but imaginable to the human mind, which, is brilliant. But paragraphs, I apologize, I'm a not of a freak, so I intend you separate the sentences by paragraph, when the person is saying something, as well. I enjoyed my time, and I hope you make the most of it. Good luck on your story ~Toxic
Love it, but here are some tips: Paragraphs-easier on the eyes. Spelling-make sure you use the right words, like were-wolf instead of wear wolf. Detail-instead of just saying she had a craving for blood and ran out of class, build it up. "I sat in history, bored as hell. Suddenly this strange feeling came over me. I felt... Thirsty. But not just for any drink. For blood. I couldn't take it anymore. I sprang up, knocking my chair and desk over. Before anyone could stop me, I ran out of the room, and into the night, eager to kill." Just a few suggestions