The want for you

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Southern_Angel, Sep 3, 2012.

  1. Bump!!  Awesome!
     
  2. Awesome! I loved it! :) bump soon pls!
     
  3. Okay I'm working on the next update as we speak its just hard trying to make it good enough for y'all 
     
  4. It is really good! Your doing an awesome job! I wrote some stories on here and yours is way better!
     
  5. I luv it update please
     
  6. Bump them if love to read them and I'm Writting it's just hard I keep wanting to change things lol
     
  7. Okay so here's the update
    Daniele's P.O.V
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    I watched as they walked off, my Aliza with another man. Not even a man a child! I could make her more happy, I could make her darkest dreams come true and her deepest wishes a reality, or at least I would try.

    What would he do? Just running around catching a ball in order to impress her, Aliza was mine and goddamm it I was going to have her.

    I thought again of the way she had looked at me though, I had hurt her and that made me want to beg at her feet for forgiveness. Maybe I should let them be, high school relationships never last long. Three weeks at the most, I could wait that long for her.

    I headed back for my office and was surprised to see Melissa summers there.

    " Can I help you with something?"

    " Yes, I need help with my two step equations. Step one introduce myself and smile, Step two watch as they fall all over me. Do you see how I'm not understanding where you went wrong in my formula."

    It annoyed me how she was trying to sound smart when she was using those terms wroung, formula and two step didn't even go together.

    " I am busy right now ms.Summers please leave." After what I had seen with Aliza I was in no mood for Melissa's games of equations.

    " Now, now Daniel I wouldn't get rid of me just yet. I happen to know how much of a favorite student Aliza is to you."

    She came closer now her hips swaying like she thought it would make me want to listen more, it did but only a little my heart still belonging to Aliza.

    "Also how ky stole her away, so ill make a deal with you, give me one date and sleepover and ill get one of my brothers to steal her away break her heart and let you come in to pick up the peices. If your still into her by then of course."

    She winked at me and walked towards me slipping a piece of paper from her chest into my front pocket.

    " Think about it." She had given me a lot to think about indeed.
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ update complete!!!
     
  8. Hehe okay I shall notify the ppl
     
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  10. Please update again please
     
  11. Lol we just did we might want to let y'all soak in the story a little bit
     
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  13. Nice story 
     
  14. Are y'all reading the story?? Lol ya didn't have to do that
     
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  16. He's one of my tutors here let me check