Bump !!! Whn u update can u wall me telling me it ? AND OMFG RAAAPPPE HE GLIPPING RAAPPPPEEED HIS DAUGHTER
Update ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Daniels P.O.V I sat down on Nathan's couch sipping my water. I had to get out to someone how I was feeling about Aliza, and Nate was a safe person to tell. " So whats on your mind Dan?" he smiled and his green eyes looked warm and friendly, convincing myself even more that it was okay to tell him " I think, I'm in love with a student." I looked up and saw the warmth still there only a shadow seemed to be covering it. " Who?" " Aliza." I waited for the you can't love a student, and I'm cAlling the cops to come but they never did, instead he burst out laughing " Of corse you fall for her, haven't even looked at women and now your in love. Oh this is rich," This was not the reaction I thought I was going to get out of Nathan but it was a reaction. " Yes I fall for the one girl I can't have." Nathan stares at me and a slow smile creeps along his face " Who ever said you couldn't? I think that if she wants it and you do to then there's really no reason to tell anyone till she turns 18." I thought about that, did she feel the same way about me? Could I actually hold her and call her mine? I nodded, even if she didn't I would do everything to make her fall for me just as hard. I wasn't about to let my Aliza go
...not having anyone to your house or know your parents is bad because...? Mystery, she's hardly very interesting, considering she's...well, perfect. This is coming from a person who read the first two updates and decided to comment on a few things. Honestly, love cannot happen at first sight. This is lust. She is lusting after her teacher, her teacher is lusting after her. Pedophile romances, almost as bad as incest. Just my opinion, keep doing it if you want. "If you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all." Oh well. We're big kids, aren't we? Don't come at me with that weak statement.
I'm not I think your right, it is lust and that's my point when the lust wears off that's when the real problem kicks in, I'm glad you told me and I'll try to build things up more
But this is also her story so there for if her characters want to be in love at first sight then hell it is her image so therefore she can honestly do as she please any way Jen really good Update more please!!!
Aww thanks your awesome you know, but I don't mind critism, it means he took time to read it and find errors