The want for you

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Southern_Angel, Sep 3, 2012.

  1. Lol srry was gone its still my turn I have a short update to do
     
  2. Great story! BUMP!! Let me know when you had updated it. :O I've been reading so much that I hadn't finished my work!
     
  3. I will update when I can get an okay with my partner kiraso soon ppl k
     
  4. Okay Kira u need to update I'm rly busyimsrry
     
  5. Ok I'll update now, but it'll probably be short.....
     
  6. It's okay I have an idea to make it long in my turn
     
  7. BUMP!! :p And puh-leaseee updateeee i beg u!!!
     
  8. Okay I'm just going to update cuz I'm
    not busy right now and I don't want y'all to be kept in wait 
     
  9. Aliza's P.O.V
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    Aliza lay still listening to the sound of her fathers breathing, deep and peaceful nothing like the horror he had been last night. She felt the bruises on her body on her upper arms and stomach.Also the big one under her eye, it was a good thing her mother had taught her how to use air brush makeup.

    No one at school would be able to see the marks that proved how miserable her life was at home. Aliza slowly got out of the bed and walked into the hallway towards the kitchen. Here she stopped right before her foot was about to touch the floor.

    Uncontrollable tears fell down her face as she sank to the floor in a sobbing heap. Her life hadn't always been this
    way, she remembered when her father had picked her up saying

    " Zay Zay,my little angel you are always loved. Me
    and your mother always love you and will never stop or hurt you."
    Aliza was 6 and blindly believed those words.

    Then her mom and dad had started fighting and decided on this creepy open relationship thing. Aliza felt hands on her back do freeing her, fearing it was her father she screamed and jumped up whirling on the attacker.

    " I'm sorry it's just me, your moms friend. I saw you crying and thought you had hurt yourself." Aliza shook her head and the stranger laughed stepping back to a comfterble distance.

    " I have a son your age, I know that you think every little thing is the end of world, Kyle is always talking about classes-" Aliza held out her hand

    " Kyle?" The man nodded.

    " Yeah Kyle, my son."
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    Okay short update but it's getting the
    plot going lol
     
  10. Okay I'm on small town and I love itfree advertising lol Idc if u advertise go do it all you want pm me and I'll do it myself
     
  11. IM SO SORRY I HAVEN'T UPDATED! >.< something came up! Is it my turn or your turn still?
     
  12. Ur turn Kyle P.O.V
     
  13. Kyle's POV
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    I sat on the curb waiting for my dad to come pick me up from football practice. 'Where the heck is he?' I thought. Football practice had ended and hour ago, and my dad was usually always there right when it ended. So where was he? I got tired of waiting and just decided to walk home. Something important must've come up for him to just leave here like this. I mean, he was a cop after all. Important stuff and emergencies came up all the time.

    It took me about half an hour to get home. I was EXHAUSTED. I dragged myself into the kitchen for something to eat for dinner. I found leftover pizza. 'This'll have to do, I'm too tired to cook anything >.<' I put the pizza in the oven and turned it on. I put on a timer so I'd know when it was finished and went upstairs to take a quick shower while it cooked.

    I took a nice, warm shower. I felt so nice and clean after just sweating my butt of and being all dirty. I changed into my pajamas and went downstairs. I took the pizza out of the oven and turned on the tv while I let the pizza cool down a little bit. I ate all my pizza and sleepily made my way to the kitchen to put the plate in the sink. 'I'm so knocking out as soon as I get upstairs. I yawned, and the front door opened.

    "Dad is that you?" I asked, poking my head out of the kitchen.

    "Yeah." he answered and stumbled into the kitchen. He smelled like sweat and perfume.

    "Dad, what were you doing? You forgot to pick me up from football practice today. I asked, even though I already knew the answer.

    "Sorry, I was just out having fun." He replied smiling.

    "With who?" I asked, raising an eyebrow.

    "Do you know a girl named Aliza that goes to your school?" he asked, smiling. My eyes widened.

    "A-Aliza?" I stuttered. He laughed.

    "Oh so you do know her? Well, I was with her mother. She was a very nice lady." He said smiling. He walked into his bedroom and closed the door, leaving me standing there with my mouth hanging wide open.
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    Sorry it's so short >.< Like jennete said, it's just to get the plot going. Hope you guys enjoy! I apologize again for not updating my part earlier >.<
     
  14. BUMP!! LET ME KNOW WHEN YOU UPDATE!!