The want for you

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Southern_Angel, Sep 3, 2012.

  1. Daniele's P.OV
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    I looked at the door as it opened reveling her, the most interesting creature I had ever met. She smiled at me and sat down in a desk right by mine.

    " Where would you like me to start?"

    she tilted her head slightly and I was hooked in her gaze when I realized I hadn't answered her question.

    " Oh here you go grade the homework, here's the key. Give them half if they tried to do the problem."
    she nodded and went to work now and then looking
    at something intensely then moving on.

    I watched her pretending to do something on my computer, but I couldn't focus on anything else when she was in the room
    with me.
    So close yet I couldn't even touch her smooth skin or caress her soft cheek. I sighed and looked at the time.Shit it was 10 minutes past the time I needed to get her home.

    " Aliza that's all for today I think it's time I got you home."
    she nodded and stood up stretching her arms over her head.

    Trust me when I say I drunk in that stretch. She met my eyes and came closer.
    " Thank you for driving me home I really appreciate it."

    My heart was beating so fast I was afraid she would hear it.

    " It's no problem at all I just don't want you getting into trouble if you walked
    back."
    she smiled and came closer so I had to look down to meet her eyes.

    " What kind of trouble could I get into?"

    I couldn't take her being so close I turned around and begin gathering up
    papers to put in my bag, " Oh we'll your a pretty girl there might be guys out there that would try to take advantage of you, older men." like me I thought.

    Aliza walked closer to me, letting her
    hand run over my back until she was
    facing me
    " There's only one older man I want to take advantage of me."
    I whipped upward to face her suggestive
    smile.

    " Come on mr.adams I have to be home
    soon."

    with that she walked out of the room, good thing too because one more second and we wouldn't have been able to leave that room. Aliza was going to be the death of me, and I was willing to let that happen.
     
  2. Oooooh  bump! And I would be glad to help you! Just pm me and let me know what you need help with. I think you're doing a great job by the way.
     
  3. Thx I just wanted to know what y'all wanted to do next
     
  4. Okay I have a Writting partner !
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  5. Daniele's P.O.V
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    I kept looking at her in the car, the way she would stare out the window like nothing had happened. But I know that what she had said was to perfect for me to dream up on my own.

    " So why can't your parents pick you up?"

    Damm it sounded like I didn't want to drive her, but I did I loved every second I could get with her.

    " Oh work. My moms a lawyer for my dad. It was how they met."

    I nodded, it sounded romantic the way her parents had fallen love. Maybe though a little inappropriate.

    Guess that's why she attracted me so much, got her mothers genes.

    " So what does your father do?"

    She looked at me and shook her head slowly with a small frown appearing on her lips. I guess that meant she didn't want to talk about it but I still wondered why.

    It seemed that the more I got to know Aliza the more mysterious she became. That was alright though, I was willing to try and solve her.

    I pulled up to her house, it was bigger then a two story but smaller then a mansion. It was red with white trimming and had a wrap around porch.

    " It's a beautiful house, your going to have to give me a tour sometime."

    She smiled at me and leaned over to give me a small hug. I held onto her and sadly pulled away first to see her eyes filled with joy, though her face was composed to look calm.

    " I'll see you tomorrow mr. Adams."

    She hoped out of my car and ran up to the front of the house opening the door and disappearing from sight. I sat in my car for a while thinking on how she had never promised to show me around, but had given me a hug.

    I smiled remembering the contact of her sweet skin, how it smelled like a musky flowery perfume. Aliza had me wrapped around her little finger.

    I smiled and drove off wishing for the day to end so I could see her again.
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    What do y'all think
     
  6. Okay it's ur turn kiara
     
  7. Working on it :) it'll probably be up tomorrow. I'm trying to update my other stories too so I kinda have a lot to write.
     
  8. Kyle's P.OV
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    I couldn't stop thinking about Aliza. She was so mysterious, it was driving me crazy. I needed to figure her out before I went insane. When she walked into school the next morning, I decided to go talk to her again. I walked up to her locker, this time keeping my hands to myself.

    "Hey, mystery girl." I grinned at her. She just looked at me.

    "What do you want?" she asked not even looking at me.

    'I want you, and I want to know everything about you' I thought. But of course, I wasn't about to tell her that.

    "I just wanted to let you know that I would never go around bragging about you and how I talked to you. You're not some freak of nature, you're a regular person. Just a little mysterious is all." I said. You could see the surprise in her eyes, but her face stood with no expression.

    "Well, thanks." she said, still showing no expression.

    "You're welcome." I said smiling. She closed her locker and turned to walk away. I grabbed her arm to stop her. She pulled her arm away and looked at me.

    "What?" she asked.

    "So do you think we can hang out sometime and you know, get to know each other better?" I asked. She just smiled and walked away. I watched her walk away and disappear into a classroom before realizing that she hadn't even answered my question. My curiosity seemed to grow more and more each time I talked to her. 'I will find out about her.' I thought, determined. I turned around and walked to my class.

    School went by in a blur. I just couldn't stop thinking about Aliza. After school was over, I headed to her locker to see if she had plans. As I turned the corner, I saw her walk into Mr. Adams' class. I casually walked by and glanced inside. She was smiling and flirting with Mr. Adams. Jealousy hit me the moment I saw them together. I stormed off and went to football practice, the sound of Aliza's giggling ringing in my ears.
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  9. Omg I luvvvv ur writing
     
  10. Awww thanks!  So I'm doing good so far?
     
  11. Ur awesome pm me wat we r going to do next
     
  12. Okay my turn let's get this update started right nowwww lol
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    Aliza walked into her house and sighed, her day had finneshed perfectly. All because Daniele had made her laugh and his hand had brushed hers when he handed her the projects to grade. She was still confused about her feelings about Kyle.

    He was sweet, and her age but Daniele was the passion in her heart that she just couldn't get rid of no matter how hard she tried. Though as the days went on she didn't try that hard anymore, instead she welcomed the passion and lived to feel it over and over.

    She walked down the hall and heard laughter from her mothers room, her mothers private room. Her mom opened the door ,only wearing a robe,so suddenly that Aliza jumped back in surprise and fear.

    " Aliza, your home. I'm glad that teacher looks out for you. Maybe you should invite him over. I'd love to meet him."

    A sly smile crept on her mothers face and Aliza knew that her mom wanted more then to just get to know him.

    " Kathren, darling what is keeping you away from me so long?"

    A husky voice called out from the room, soon followed by a man with dirty blonde hair and bright blue eyes. He was very muscular and had a friendly smile to go with his gorgase face.

    " Hello there. you must be Aliza, Correct?"

    Aliza nodded and backed away from her mother and the man that was not her father. She ran into the kitchen and heard the door shut and laughing start.

    Aliza had never had to meet the people her parents cheated on each other with. She always just had to wash their clothes or make food and leave it at the
    door.

    She never heard her dad coming down the hall untill he banged the door open and pulled out a whiskey bottle.

    " I keep mine at a hotel or their place, why does the god damm women shove her lovers in my face!"

    Aliza kept quiet and saw her father lose his soberniess more and more as the minutes ticked. She was afraid to move and alert him of her presence.

    It was too late though she saw as he took the last swig and thrown the bottle in the trash can right by her.

    " Aliza, darling when did you get home?" Only it came out more allow hay hen you gish hearb? She stayed put not making a sound not letting the fear show in her face.

    " I love you baby so much. Why didn't you freaking tell me that there was another man in this house before I went in there to make the god damm beds!?!?"

    He was yelling and taking all his anger out on her now. Aliza let him hoping that he would storm off and leave her alone. To her dismay he came and picked her up off the chair and into the hallway.

    " You are going to pay for not telling me baby. I'm going to get your mother back by any means possible, even hitting you, or what ever I feel like. I'm the man in this house god dammit you women need to learn that one way or another!"

    Aliza let her tears flow as her father closed her bedroom door.
     
  13.  whoa this is getting good! Awesome job! 
     
  14. Thx it awesome too