Update: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Daniels P.O.V I ran to Aliza's side and held her close looking all over her body for where the bullet had periced her. To my horror and somewhat relief I found it in her shoulder close to her chest, not that fatal but only if I could stop the blood flow in time, I prayed I could or I knew I would kill Kyle with my bare hands. Pressing my hands to her shoulders I heard her moan in pain. "Shhh, darling I'm so sorry that it hurts but I have to." She seemed to accept this and just clenched her teeth when I put more pressure on, opening her eyes she gazed up at me and they softened. I had never seen her this vulnerable with all of her guards down. She seemed to smile at me with joy but also with sorrow in the depths of her eyes. "Daniel, you were amazing. You are amazing, I'm so glad I got to know you. Thank you so much. Thank you." I smiled and shook my head tears coming out. "Darling shh, you never ever have to thank me. I will always be there for you do you understand. Never think that I won't." "I won't I promise." Closing her eyes Aliza passed out relaxing under my hands as they pressed on the wound. I blinked and saw a tear fall. What was this girl doing to me making me cry? I have never cried, though now that I think about it, it is a worthy time to cry, it was a tear for Aliza and those were always worth shedding. I looked up from Aliza and saw the brothers who had tied up Kyle and called the police and the ambulance. They stated at Aliza with cold faces, Hunter had recived a shot that had grazed his arm leaving the fabric torn and his arm bloody. Marcus ahead a bullet in his right arm on his upper forearm but he had tied fabric tightly around it to apply pressure. "Will she be okay?" Marcus asked nothing in his tone giving away what he was feeling. I supposed it was shock. "Yes she will be alright I promise." Hunter smiled, it wavered looking almost like a grimace. "I hope she is okay, that basterd Kyle shouldnt be the reason of Aliza dying. He would enjoy it to much." I nodded frowning. I really would kill Kyle after this if Aliza didn't make a speedy recovery. Sirens wailed and I knew that the police were here for kyle and the ambulance was waiting her. Picking Aliza up I carried her outside to the paramedics running up to meet us. A short woman took hold of Aliza surprisingly strong and carried her to a stretcher inside the vehicle. The tall man with a black goatee and a tatto on both forearms shined a light in my eyes and seemed pleased with the results. "Sit in the truck sir, we will get the student to the hospital after we check the rest of the members in the house. You did a good job applying pressure. She was lucky to have a cool headed teacher in that situation." Teacher? Student? How did he know what we were? Then I realized I was wearing the school shirt and was obvisioly not a student. I walked over after nodding to the paremedic and sat next to Aliza watching her as the woman did a number of things to help the bleeding. Watching her I thought of a silver lining to all of this. I had to or I would probably wind up on another stretcher for shock. Aliza was finaly mine now. She had called me amazing. This meant there was a chance for us. A chance for me and her to finaly be together. A chance for us to love each other. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Awww how sweet I cried a little but hey this was a mushy update haha Love y'all till next time
Update: Final update ~~~~~~~~~~ Aliza's P.O.V She wakes up slowly in a startling white room. "Where am I?" A hand is in her hand and she squeezes it softly trying to wake someone to tell her where she is. The hand stirs and a pair of sleepy eyes meet hers then they crinkle into joy and pain. "Aliza.." Before she can reply to Daniele's voice his mouth is on hers holding her close kissing her in a passionate desperate frenzy. It isn't hard to reply to the question his kiss asks; I desire you and treasure you despretly, is that okay? Aliza's replies while her mouth explores his; I want you and no one else. A soft cough interrupts their kiss conversation and Aliza jumps guilty. Daniel at least looks calmly at the nurse saying politely, "Yes?" " It looks like she will be fine. Just take it easy okay sweetie." Winking at Aliza the nurse turned and left the room. Looking at Daniel a slight blush crosses her face remembering the kiss he had given her. He smiles at her and let's his lips find hers again, softer this time but still just as promising. Aliza knew she was loved then. No one could take that away from her. No one interrupted them this time. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Resting in her room Aliza tossed and turned giggling when she replaied the kiss for the millionth time in her head. She had never been this happy before in her life. Daniel had said that was the only time though he would kiss her until she turned 18. Sometimes she wished he wasn't such a goody goody but that was what she loved about him. Hunter had called and left a long voicemail asking if she was okay and all that. Marcus had texted a long text saying how he wanted to make up for her life or death situation at their house by taking her out. Aliza replied to both that she was fine and had someone who was caring for her. That someone was Daniel who stopped by with the excuse of bringing me homework. Even her parents were on their best behavior and she recalled the genuine smile her mother had given her father as they sat by her bed talking to her. Maybe things would start getting better in her life. Though she was morose that it had to be at the expense of a mans life and his sons, Kyle's sanity. She would always remember Kyle she promised herself as she slipped off to bed, as the nice guy who had been her first love. Aliza wouldn't remember the bad because even Kyle deserved to have one person thinking of all the great things he had done before Aliza had ruined his life. Aliza was finaly ready to start living with an open heart because Kyle had proven that keeping her heart closed from what it wanted was never the right thing. Ever. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I hope you liked it guys I hope you enjoyed the want for you because I may make a sequel who knows post if you want one or not
OMG Did I hear someone say sequel?????? Sequel definately! We have to find out what happens when she turns 18! Amazing story Jennete!
Aww thank you and guess what I have found someone to write with me on the sequel so don't hold y'all's breath well do but don't worrie about it Snow is an amazing writer and I'm so excited to write with her
Ahh...the plot holes. Why is he teaching so young? Where are the rest of the lessons? Why did the parents decide to have an open relationship? Why did the father only beat her once? How is no one else suspicious of this relationship? Where are the people who care about Kyle, he's popular, I'd guess good-looking, probably has a lot of friends who'd notice that he's fucking crazy? What the heck is wrong with the other teacher for allowing all of this? What's the big deal about her being secretive? Why does no one care about the fact that the main man used deception to get her back? Why does she not question it further when a girl that she hates invites her over to spend the night? Where were Melissa's parents during the shooting? Why would Melissa call the teacher instead of the police? Why was there barely any buildup to the whole shooting thing, like where he got his gun or why he decided to shoot it? Also, you called Daniel Daniele several times. And in Aliza's point of view, it's not actually her point of view, but you still sometimes used 'me'. Also, there are so many grammatical mistakes that could've easily been picked up, as well as the fact that it was rushed and anticlimactic. I just had to get it off my chest. Reading it, it wouldn't stop bothering me until I commented on it. I'm sorry.
Thank you again Quinny I know that you don't like this story on previous comments but I still feel happy that you took time to go through everything and read all of it to make a post that will help me in future writings If I could in pull hug you I really would You are my favorite critic and I know all stories need a critic so you are mine haha I hope you will also critique the sequel I'm making with Snow, it would mean the world to me. Love you Quinny