The want for you

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Southern_Angel, Sep 3, 2012.

  1. Awesome. Bump
     
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  3. Bump haha my tablet is broken so I cannot post but I will try on here promise
     
  4. Update- authors note

    Sadly it will take time but yay that I have something I'd love to share with y'all I will be wrapping up this story soon but I was thinking of a sequel

    What do y'all think post in if y'all want this story to have a sequel or stay single haha



    love you all soooooooooo much 
     
  5. I don't care as long as you update
     
  6. Update:
    Daniele's P.O.V
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    I had gone home from a long day and sat in the only chair in my living room not filled with papers to grade. I was still worried about Aliza and Kyle. What if he tried to hurt her? Would it be my fault?


    Melissa had started all of this by giving me the bone of having my Aliza to myself again.


    Sighing I slipped into a daydream state that the thought of her often led me to when the shrill call of my cell phone buzzed.


    I glared at the device but answered when I saw it was Melissa. Probably news about the sleep over.

    "Melissa, is everything okay?" I heard a loud bang then and a shill scream. Jumping to my feet my heart rate sped up. "MELISSA!!!"

    "Daniel help, K-Kyle showed up and my brothers are trying to stop him b-but h-he has a g-gun! Me a-and Zay are hiding Help us please!" She was crying and I heard how badly she was stuttering.


    I was out the door not bothering to close the door as I jumped in my car and pulled out onto the street.


    My Aliza was in trouble and this could be all my fault. I would save her no matter what.
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    Aliza's P.O.V
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    She stood in the large walk in closet at the very end with Melissa trembling. Aliza still didn't realize why Mel had Daniels number but she was glad. Kyle had pulled up in the car hours ago and at first she had thought he had just missed her.


    That was not the case. He had burst in and started yelling for her. Mel had come down to tell him to get out of her house but her brothers stopped her. Marcus had grabbed a gun of his own and shouted for the two of us to hide as he and Hunter, solved things.


    That is how they ended up here as they heard shots ring out down stairs. She hoped that the shots meant that Marcus and Hunter was still alive.

    She didn't want anyone to get hurt for her being stupid and not seeing how unhinged Kyle had been getting.

    Mel sat down beside her and wiped tears from her eyes. "Do y-you think their still-" another round of shots cut her off when a loud curse and scream followed. Aliza closed her eyes her own make up Mel had put on her before this ordeal running,"I hope so Mel. I can only hope."

    That was all they had now.

    Hope and Fear.
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    I hope y'all are happy with the two P.O.V's haha
    Love you all bunches
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  7. OHMYGOSHHH I MISSED THIS SO MUCH 
     
  8. Omg amazing dont take so long for updating please!
     
  9. Why do you hold us in suspense tell meee ahmazing update
     
  10. So amazing! Bump!
     
  11. Haha and I hold y'all in suspense cuz it's fun sooooo ohhhhh what's going to happen next and are the brothers, Danel and Aliza going to make it all right














    I don't know because my um update *coughs*

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    sooooooo

    It might *coughs*

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  12. UPDATE N WALL ME WHEN UPDATED
     
  13. OMG I love this story! :D I started reading it today and it rocks!!! :D Please wall me when you update please :) BUMP! :)
     
  14. Update: I hope y'all love it haha
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    Daniel's P.O.V


    I pulled up to the giant house and jumped out if the car not worrying about a seat belt sense I had not even bothered to put one on.


    I saw the door hanging wide open and I growled when a gunshot was heard. It was that stupid basterd Kyle who was shooting for my Aliza. I was going to make him pay. She was my mystery, my sweetest poison. No idiot with a gun would take her away from me.


    I had only just found her. I already had plans, we would wait until she graduated and then I would openly embrace her making her lips respond to mine and to make a blush cross her face every time I said I loved her.

    For I did. I loved Aliza. I loved her with all my being and I promised that if I got her out of here- no , when I got her out , I would tell her this. I would show her how much I loved her.


    Running inside I saw the Summer brothers behind a turned over oak coffee table shooting with guns that the probably had only acquired for showing off.


    Kyle stood there, his hair plastered to his face which was scrunched up in a twisted demented way. Though his eyes were wide open and they reflected only the true inner insanity that I knew had hidden there.


    Turning Kyle saw me and raised the gun shouting, "It's you! You stupid Teacher-" A yell cut him off and I saw standing there at the top of the stairs with her deep burgundy hair wild around her head and fear sinking in her eyes a girl who I wished wasn't there at all.

    Calling out again Aliza looked at Kyle and Kyle alone, "If your going to shoot someone, shoot me."


    Kyle looked up at her and I saw pain register in his eyes. "No, Aliza why would I shoot you? I love you." I growled, that maniac thought he loved her. He only lusted for her and threw his wishes onto her. He could never know what love was. Kyle couldn't love.

    "Kyle, it's my mom who's dating your dad. It's her who takes him out and it's me who got them so close in the first place." Tears were falling across her pale cheeks and I wanted to go help her and make her happy again but I knew that would be after we disarmed Kyle.

    Kyle shook his head and took a step back away from Aliza. "No, your mom was with my dad before we dated." Aliza smiled softly and pain crossed her eyes.

    "She would have dumped him, she never stays with a man this long. It's my fault. I knew how your dad would change and I didn't warn you. I should have. I am so sorry Kyle."

    Kyle's face hardened and he took two steps forward and raised the gun. "Are you telling the truth?"

    Aliza nodded and I felt panic well up inside if me. He was going to shoot her. Marcus must have realized this too because a shoot rang out and Kyle was down clutching his side where he had been hit.


    Growling he raised the gun and fired before I jumped on him knocking the weapon out of his hand. I head a soft thump and looking over I saw something that made my blood run cooled.

    Aliza's body laying on the stairs.

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    Okay it's not over dont hate me haha love you all sooooooooo much 
     
  15. Omg ur such a thrilling writer loved it