The want for you

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Southern_Angel, Sep 3, 2012.

  1. Update:
    Aliza's P.O.V
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    The house was big. Greatly, terribly, amazingly big. Aliza hopped out of the big car and started down the huge driveway. Why must everything be so big? She wondered to herself as Melissa went on and on about how the house was restored from something and being in it made her feel like a princess and then something else.

    Aliza wasn't really paying all that attention to what Melissa was saying, just on how large the house was. Maybe she thought she'd be sleeping her own room.

    " It is big enough." Hunter and Melissa stopped and looked at her until Aliza realized she had said some of her thoughts out loud. A burning sensation came to her cheeks and she tried to brush off the remark.

    " Oh I was just thinking that's its like a palace and how It is big enough to be one." She looked from the two of them and tried to see if they were buying it. It seemed like they were but what did she know about them, for all she knew those blank faces were ones of anger.

    " Well if this is a castle then your a princess." Hunter replied grinning as he picked Aliza up and started walking to the doorway where suddenly the grand twin doors flew open. " Brother I see you brought company." Marcus, Melissa's oldest brother said coolly looking her over. "Oh don't be like that Mark, this is Mel's guest not mine so be nice."

    Marcus rolled he's eyes and took her from Hunter setting Aliza on her feet. "Then I say we return her to our sister." Hunter frowned and stalked in the house. When Aliza looked over her shoulder for Melissa she saw her texting not caring about what her brothers were doing.

    Aliza looked back at Marcus who was now smiling in the doorway that was made for a palace with grand carvings above it. He stood looking like a fairytale prince had been put in a modern chick flick drama by mistake. " Shall I give you a tour?" Aliza nodded and into the place the stunning prince took her.
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    Sorry it took so long but I hope you guys like it my fans there is a big update coming up next so I'm trying to get all my new characters out of the way as it all wraps up hehe
     
  2. Okay for the holidays I guess I'll do a story for y'all but I want to make it clear now that this has nothing to do with the real story lol enjoy this steamy character that Aliza has seemed to pick up in her life hehe

    Warning:*:*:kissing scene shall be included lol if you don't like it don't read!! stop now or forever hold your angry comments:*:*:

    Aliza made her way home in the snow on Christmas, a day where she new her parents would probably have their own "Friends". She had indeed seen Christmas's where her parents got so mad at each other that angry love was all they we're capable of.
    Those were the worst because the next morning her mother would say that it had been a mistake and her father, heartbroken all over again would take it out on Aliza. She shuddered and walked along slower trying to postpone the "Family" Christmas.

    A shiny car pulled up next to her and rolled down the windows." Aliza? Are you walking home?" Daniele asked in a concerned voice. Aliza nodded to cold to talk without fear of her teeth chattering. " Well get in then."

    She nodded and climbed in the car turning the vents to her and warming her hands. " Do you mind if we drop by my house? I need to send some emails real quick."

    " Sure, I don't really have anything planned." Daniele looked at her with curious eyes. " Really no one special for the holidays?" Aliza laughed softly and turned to meet his eyes, aware of how close they were. " I'm with the person who's special to me right now."

    A light snow had begun to fall from the sky, as if someone up there new that what was about to happen was something magical and secret that needed to be hidden from the world and kept between them. A memory that would be forever held in the snow.

    Daniele without further prompting leaned over and grazed his lips across hers, wanting her to pull away and save them from what he was doing.
    Showing her that he loved her and that she would always be his. Aliza was great at saving herself but not others and so she unbuckled her seat belt and leaned in closer kissing him softly, like the snow falling outside.

    Aliza had never wanted anyone as much as she craved for Daniele right there in the snow, and though outside everything was beginning to freeze, her own heart was warming up.

    Daniele pulled away to soon his breathing unsteady and ragged." We shouldn't have done that, I'm your teacher and-" Aliza cut him off by kissing him lightly on the lips then sitting back in her own seat smiling.

    " Don't say we shouldn't have because it happened. I'm glad it did, you've made this my best Christmas ever." Daniele slowly smiled to and started the car driving away from the moment that would forever be held in the snow.
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    I think this is the only post I have cried at while writing, does that say something about me??? Merry Christmas Eve guys :-*
     
  3. Awe sweety great updates love love love them so much
     
  4. AWW THAT'S ADORABLE!!!  lol. I really loved it. So cute. Haha
     
  5. AWEEEE BUMP
     
  6. Writing update sorry its taking forever haha
     
  7. Love it! BUMP!!!!!!
     
  8. bump!! Love it
     
  9. Please update quickly
     
  10. Haha I'm trying y'all just getting over writers block and when I start redoing the whole thing lol
     
  11. Bump! Thanks for the mention, I used to be 5hreya
     
  12. Haha yay love yoiy girl