The want for you

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Southern_Angel, Sep 3, 2012.

  1. It's getting good Jen wall me when next update is ready
     
  2. Omg i love this sooo much. I dont think ive read one like this beforeUpdate please let me know when you do:)
     
  3. Aww thank you guys ill upate when i can okay cant right now on the wrong device but soon my lovelies
     
  4. Update

    Aliza's P.O.V
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    Aliza knew something was wrong when a perfectly manicured hand tapped on her desk.

    " Hey Ali, I was just thinking how we never hang out."

    " Well I assumed that was because we didn't like each other." She had no idea what Melissa wanted but she was strangely curious.

    " Of course not, I think we've never tried to be friends. Why don't you come over this afternoon and we can hang and get to know each other better." Melissa smiled a genuine smile then throwing Aliza off. Melissa had never smiled at her, ever.

    She reasoned this was why the next words that came out of her mouth were,

    " Okay then ill meet you after school." With another weird smile Melissa left to sit at her desk. Class went by fast and Aliza was still in a daze on what had happened. One thing for sure though, Melissa was up to something.

    She sighed, rummaging through her locker for her book. It had gotten stuck in the very back behind her science textbook and was taking forever to pull out. Muttering she tugged and suddenly it slipped free sending her flying, her balance off.

    Two strong arms caught her though before she hit the ground. They tightened around her waist and when Aliza looked up bright spring green eyes met hers.

    " Hello there I'm hunter." She knew that name though it was foggy. Hunters smile spread as he lifted her back to her feet from the dip they had been in. His blonde hair set off a ding in her head and made her step back.

    It was Hunter summer who had caught her, Melissa's brother. After she had just invited her to come over too.

    " I'm, um. Thank you for catching me." She stammered out still getting over the realization.

    His smile was bright and she felt her stomach quiver slightly, like some butterflies she hadn't even known of had awoken.

    " Well thank you for letting me catch you, it's an honor to be able to hold a Beatuiful girl."

    With a wink he walked off, he took powerful strides and filled the space around him with confidence.

    Shaking her head she closed her locker and sighed not knowing anything else to prolong her fate. It was time to see Melissa.
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    What do y'all think??? Is that a cliff hanger or is that a cliff hanger 
     
  5. Omg please bump I feel like I'm watching the movie lol
     
  6. Ooo thats gonna be a fun sleep over lmao let me know on next update
     
  7. I know right the sleep over of doom maw ha ha
     
  8. Bumpity Bump Bump! 
     
  9. Update
    Daniels P.O.V
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    I had basically sold my soul to the she devil. Melissa was true on her word though and convinced her brothers to be on their worst behavior around Aliza in return for the date.

    It hadn't been that bad, we had seen a movie (her choice of course) and thankfully were not in the back where she most likely would have tried something. After that the girl insisted on dinner. If I hadn't been so keen on Aliza , Melissa would have drove me crazy.

    We ended the night at my place, drinking wine and soon thankfully she passed out. It may have been that I gave her the strong wine that you need to be use to to not get dizzy but who can say really. I took her home to one of her brothers and went back to sleep glad that it was over.

    Walking out of the class room I saw Aliza in a boys arms, a boy clearly not kyle. It must be one of Melissa's brothers, I thought to myself. Though seeing then together was painful it was nice to know that her plan was working, Aliza had a light pink blush staining her cheeks.
    Not many people I had noticed could make her blush like that and I was happy that I was one of the lucky few.

    It also pleased me a little when I saw kyle standing off a little watching the entire scene. His fists were clenches in anger and I saw that jealousy had over took his school boy features.

    What I also saw scared me for two reasons, his face held a darkness in it that may have been shadows or the light but I doubted that, it looked like the kind of expression a rattle snake has when its violently shaking his tail to warn you that you've come to close or in this case too far.

    It scared me because I feared it would be taken out on Aliza and the second reason was, I didn't know what kind of snake he was.

    At first glance he seemed like the kind that you see in a zoo with its fangs taken out, but now I was seeing that maybe he was the kind in the wild with a deadly bite. A bite I feared that was going to sink into Aliza.
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    Dun dun dunnnnnnnn who is safe and is this possibly guilt in poor Mr.Adams?!!! Find out hehe
     
  10. I signed up for a cover so yay!! ヾ(๑'◡')ノ"
     
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    Hope you like it!