The Wandering Warriors

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by Percyous, Sep 20, 2012.

  1. This is really very good writing. You are consistent in effort and voice even with these long updates! Very very good work. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
     
  2. As the battle raged on James, Aizen, and Angel each used their own methods to fight. While James used revolvers, one-shot pistols, shotguns, and his sword, Aizen used his bare hands and legs to take down his own share of knights. Angel however, ran her bow over her fiddle's strings creating enchanting music. As the sounds filled the air Knights' droped to the floor wriggling in pain as the music tore their souls to shreds. The only one not fighting was Alex, she stood watching over the fight from a tall mound of rubble that overlooked the newly made Battlefield.

    As they fought Percyous was advancing through the battle with ease. His target was clear. Angel. However, inorder to get to her he had to fight James.

    As Percyous and James met a circle was cleared around them and all of the fighting completely stoped as everyone acknowledged the confrontation about to occur. "Step aside." Percyous growled softly as James rested his hands on the hilts of his two sheathed swords. "Surrendure." Was James' only reply as Percyous smiled, let out a laugh and sneered at James, "You wish."

    Instead of drawing his sword as James reached for his two weopons Percyous flicked his right wrist and extended his Index finger. A second later a cut apeared acrross James' chest as Percyous relaxed agian. "Last chance to surrendure." In reply James spat on the ground amd raised his fists defensivky as he said "You may have abondoned your duty, but I will protect her." at this there was another scowl as Percyous angrily replied "You side with the witch who enslaved me? Fine. You have chosen your own death." Percyous quickly began moving his arms, wrists, and index fingers in a quick pattern before he stoped and allowed his knives attached to the strings tied to his index finger hang in plain sight as James stared blankly ahead. Percyous then hid his left knife agian, then took the one on the right on his hand as he walked towards James with it raised. As he walked James crumpled to his knees as multiple slices opened in his coat and blood began to drip from both his chest and the knives. "Time to die."
     
  3. Very, very, very, good.