The Unknown Creatures

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by GP-TheNerdyOne, Feb 16, 2013.

  1. Bump. This is an incredible story so far
     
  2. Blaire, you'll see
     
  3. There's a twist coming on *sings*
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    Grunt. That's what I mostly do now.
    Meet D. She's my best friend.. now. And what I mean by best friend, we just exchange awkward grunts and stares. We got pretty close to some words once, and.. Yeah.

    Ever since I died and became a zombie, I don't remember if I had a job, my parents, my name.. It was A.. A something. And I probably didn't have a job if you look at my hoodie.
    Humans call us corpses. I don't know if there are any other kind of zombies out there.

    We are at an airport. I don't know why we come here. I guess we are all waiting for something. But what?

    I took a stroll around the airport, and I came to an escalator. I was lost. No seriously, I'm lost, I never came to this part of the airport before.
    Some kids pass by. And when I say some, I mean 2. They look at me. Maybe they're lost too.

    I stroll around some more and I caught a Morie. A Morie is a zombie that'll eat anything with a heartbeat. At least I don't have one. Tough tooties to people who has one.
    Anyway, this Morie was eating a corpse, one of our kind. I should tell you more about corpses.

    We don't feel, have dreams, bleed, we barely have a heart, and... Um, what else?
    I think that's pretty much it.

    Corpses are not supposed to have heartbeats. That's why that Morie was eating him.

    I felt sorrow for that corpse.


    Then a Morie jumped out at me.

    C'mon, I already died!
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    Like it? And remember, the corpse name starts with an A.. A what?
    There's a hint for you guys.
     
  4. Very good 
     
  5. And you guys don't even try to guess what the corpse's name was
     
  6. I think I know...
     
  7. Ehem.
    What do you think it is?
     
  8. Ill just wait until the next update to see if I'm right. I'm not going to tell u who I think it is for now...
     
  9. Jaz
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    "R..R.. Rory.." I whispered, my voice barely audible.

    "Julie, JULIE!" He was shaking with sweat, tears, blood.. No. This can't happen now!

    I remember the days when I was a vampire. But I didn't want to be a vampire anymore after what I did to my best friend. They stabbed me multiple times, but I survived, and then they told me to change my name. I chose Julie. I chose Julie because that's what my best friend wanted to name her child.

    "Rory.. This is all my fault. I shouldn't have underestimated the power of vampires," I turned around and pulled the spear out of my chest. The searing pain stung at me. "I deserve this."

    My best friend's name was Angela. I killed her. I was a bloodsucking monster. Now I have no idea where her body went.

    I heard faint footsteps. I couldn't believe what was in front of my eyes.

    There was a super pale, super dull zombie that stood in front of me.
    I knew that face.















    "ANGELA!"
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  10. Yes I was right!
     
  11. Bump!!! I knew it was her all along
     
  12. Oh yeah! My guess was right! It's really Angela! I never thought that she'd became into a zombie and it really surprised me. Thank God she's not dead~ Nice update, girl! Keep it up! 
     
  13. Thanks guys
    I'll update when I have time
     
  14. Haha, only Jaz knows why Angela got turned into a zombie and "Julie" didn't
     

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    "ANGELA!"

    I looked up. Was that my name? It did start with an A, right?
    RIGHT?

    Who was this girl? I studied her face. Blue eyes that sparkle like the ocean, locks of golden hair.. She was beautiful.
    Wait, was I'm having some sort of girl crush?
    Was I FEELING?

    I felt a tingle of recognition in my body. I looked at her.

    "Wh.. Who.. A-are.. Y..you...?" I managed to croak.

    "Um, I'm Julie. Don't you remember?" She replied, looking a bit confused.

    "N..no.. I..thought..your..n-name..was... Bianca..."

    She stared at me, aghast.
    I stared back at her. Don't be creepy, don't be creepy,

    "Bianca? Your name is Bianca?" Said a voice.

    I looked at the cause of the sound. There was a boy, I didn't notice him yet.

    I then studied his face, but....












    "YESSSSS! F-FINALLY..."


    The only thing I could hear was two people running after me, and my own, ragged breathing.
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    Sorry if this update was bad