The Stalker From the Past

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by -Treasure-, Oct 19, 2012.

  1. yea mom I forgot to tell you I change my name a lot 
     
  2. >_> i will bazooka off your balls.............. I made no sense >_>
     
  3. alex!  MY SON! YOUR SISTER IS BACK! YOU HAVE A LITTLE SISTER. Her name is Therese
     
  4. NO YUKI!  and hey Alex!  yuki he's not a creepier NO HURTING MY BROTHER 
     
  5. I have three sisters now
     
  6. Awwwthen what can i do and in the story??
     
  7. UPDATE MY PEEPS! it's below
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    (still May's POV)

    He grabbed Grace and Liz. He tied them up and he stood looking at me with a big hammer in his hands.
    "Don't!!" I cried knowing he was gonna hurt them.
    "Why? They escaped from me...they need to know to be good girls, rather then bad..." He said as he lifted the hammer and smashed Liz's left knee.
    She cried from the pain.
    "Shut up Little B-" He was cut off from Karl screaming,
    "LET US GO!"

    I looked at Karl to shut him up.
    He did. Allan then smashed Liz's right knee. She cried even louder from the pain of that on top of the other one.
    "That must teach you Liz." he said with a smirk.

    He walked over to Grace and lifted the hammer. I tackled Allan and knocked him to the ground.
    "Stay away from my friends!" I said as I put him in a head lock.
    I could hear him choking and his face turning red.

    Meanwhile Karl had escaped and Untied Grace and Liz. He carried Liz to the car and laid her out on the back seat.

    I was still choking Allan. He tapped out and I let go.
    "You gonna stop now?!" I asked with an angry voice.
    "No!" He chuckled. "I will never stop til I have you..."

    I quickly tied him up and ran to Grace who had a gun. She held it up to her head.
    "This is too much. We both know that we're gonna lose!" She cried clicking the gun...
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    NOOOO Grace!! Will she do it?...
     
  8. WOMAN DONT LEAVE ME IN SUSPENSE!!!! UPDATE MOREEEE
     
  9. Update!!!!  and mommy who's my little sister again?
     
  10. , her name is therese. her username is x_musiclover_x
     
  11. Lol wait til tomorrow guys!  I haven't writen it yet! Idk if I shld kill her off...
     
  12. Oooooo that means I am spoiled cause I'm the only son  jealous sisters 
     
  13. I'm sorry mom but it is true 
     
  14. Jealous? Of what?  girls are cooler 
     
  15. yes you know we are...